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Title: A meeting, the first year, and an accident. 01 Mar 2009 4:30 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    The dramatic skip in time made me slightly sad. The best thing about reading these types of stories is seeing how the characters will grow together and apart and how it happens,
    :( I liked it, but there are a few errors.
Title: A meeting, the first year, and an accident. 06 Nov 2008 9:21 am
Reviewer: SandraSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    very good story.please update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It encourages me.
Title: A meeting, the first year, and an accident. 27 Oct 2008 7:32 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh nice! I just posted my first story, as well. It is a little scary, isn't it?

    But you've done a nice job. I love how you ended the chapter too; leaving us wanting more!

    Author's Response: Thank You! I shall return the favor and read yours!
Title: A meeting, the first year, and an accident. 27 Oct 2008 7:02 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this idea for a story. I like the idea of Harry staying with the Malfoys. Sounds like an interesting premise. I would have liked to see more of Snape and Harry's interactions before you jumped to the end of the year though. You have a few typos throughout the chapter. Good start.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I promise there will be more of Harry and Snape's interactions in the next chapter.
Title: A meeting, the first year, and an accident. 27 Oct 2008 1:38 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This a very good beginning. I'm assuming Harry Apparated himself there by magic, and I want to see what will happen to him with the Malfoys.

    Author's Response:

    Yes you are correct. I was planning on covering that in the next chapter. Thanks for the Review!


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