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Reviews For An Uncertain Future
Author's Response: Well...Snape has had a tremendous shock, he just needs a bit of time. Harry is really going to need him soon, and hopefully Snape will step up to the plate, and be there for his son, like he hasn't been in the past. We'll just have wait to see if Snape will soften up, won't we? ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, Snape is not necessarily a nice guy in this story. However...as time goes on, he will come to see Harry in a differnt light. He was just really angry at Harry for using Dark Magic to bring him back. But then again...Snape has never been known to be the most reasonable person. Right now, Snape is in shock, and feels cheated that he didn't get to be reunited in death with Lily, and of course he blames Harry for this. Given time though, he will be drawn to Harry, because Harry is so much like Lily; once Snape can get past his prejudices, of course.
Author's Response: Thank you. I too was very upset with how J.K. Rowling ended her series, and wished for a better ending; in particular, one where Snape didn't die! I had also really wished that she had had Snape turn out to be Harry's father. Alas, I can't change Canon, but I can give it my own spin, can't I? As I responded to someone else, while I will not change Snape's basic character, (because I love him snarkey!) he will gradually begin to see Harry as his son, and not the person that he was conditioned to hate.
how much chapter your story? can you say please.because im worried when snape beginning soft opposite to harry. Author's Response: Snape has just been through a great shock, and he's very angry with Harry for using Dark Magic to bring him back, because no one knows better than Snape, the dangers of dabbling in Dark Magic. I'm not sure how many chapters the story will be, but don't worry, Snape will eventually come to see Harry as more of a son. However, this does not mean that Snape will suddenly turn into father-of-the year; there will be many stumbling blocks along the way. Snape is by nature, very reserved, and discipline, so it is very doubtful that he will easily be able to show emotion easily towards Harry, but the effort will eventually be there.
By the way, "ingredient" has an "e" for its last vowel, not an "a". Did you find out whether or not that phrase was American or British? I'm curious... Anyway, great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one! And, in answer to your question, I live in Edmonton. ;-) Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out Shannon, I will go and fix it. I live in Quebec, so perhaps because ingrediants is spelt with an e in French, maybe I wasn't thinking! ;) Yes, I consulted with someone who has a friend from England, and Deco is indeed correct that it was not a common British term, especially for a teenager. It is apparantly starting to be used a little more now, but during the timeframe that the Wizarding world seems to live in it would not be something that Harry would spontaneously say. Yes, Snape is quite pissed off that Harry used Dark Magic to bring him back. Dark Magic has caused Snape to lose everything precious to him, and the creatiion of the Horcrux itself is something that causes him alot of pain. Snape is not particularly nice in this story, but as time goes along, perhaps he will soften up towards Harry a bit. Thank you for your review, and it's always nice to talk to another Canadian! ;)
Author's Response: I get very frustrated when a story is not finished, so barring any unforseen catastrophe, I will do my best to finish it to the end! Thank you for your review! ;) By the way Shannon, I got confused with the a & e thing in ingredient. I'll go check, can't remember "what" I did anymore! ;) i'll go consult my dictionary! Sometimes it's hard because some words we spell the same as the British, and others we don't. And my Beta is American, so some spellings are different for her too. |
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