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Title: Downward Spiral 21 Jul 2011 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha - about time people started getting concerned! Gah, this does not bode well.

    Excellently done!

    Author's Response: Yes, it's about time everyone paid attention, including Snape. Thanks DP.
Title: Downward Spiral 20 Jan 2010 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OH CRAP!!! WHAT?!?!?! Harry, you did NOT just go there!!!! OMGosh!!! I KNEW that something bad would happen if Harry delt with the Dark Magic! And now I'm certain Severus's has made the connection. He just HAS to! I mean, he's gone that road too.

    And just for the record, I would've punched Draco too. He's an annoying little prat. But I do think Severus and Minerva's anger was reasonable...though of course Severus might go a hint too far....a big hint....but still!

    OMGoodness! I hope Snape will at least be willing to help Harry now that he's probably got it all figured.

    Wonderful chappie Pandora! I'll read on a bit later.! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Ivy.  Hee hee, Harry is a little rash, isn't he?  Yeah, he took a chance with that Dark Magic, a big risk, and now he's paying for  it.

     

    I would have punched Draco too. He's annoying all right!  It's not unreasonable to believe that Snape would throw a fit, and or go too far.

     

    Snape will  help Harry now that he knows what he's dealing with.

     

    Thanks Ivy. I really appreciate you reviewing every chapter. Tahnks again.

Title: Downward Spiral 11 Nov 2009 8:26 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Voldemort has got to behind all this. I'm glad I haven't been at this site for a while, since now I'll have the pleasure of reading chapters in sequence--at least till I get to the most recent one! Fine storytelling, here.

    Author's Response: Aw...you'll see. There are a few surprises in store.  Thanks so much for your kind wors.
Title: Downward Spiral 17 Jan 2009 5:18 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa! Harry’s really snapped; seems the dark pull inside him has increased, and Malfoy’s needling went too far. Good thing Snape halted the crucio curse! I really hope to read the next chapter soon, I'm waiting in suspense to find out what will happen...

    The animosity between Harry and Snape has really gotten intense, more then usual with Harry's current behavior. I like that you make them act in character throughout this, I think that regardless of how Harry is being persuaded, that they would still have complications in their relationship revelation... this dark hold over Harry just adds a nice twist :)

    Author's Response: Thank you.  I am trying hard to keep them in character as much as possible. Yes, Harry is consumed by whatever forces have hold of him.  As tempting as it is to want to cast a "Crucio" on that git Malfoy, it's a good thing that Severus is so intuitive and talented at Defence; otherwise Harry would be sitting in a cell in Azkaban right about now!
Title: Downward Spiral 10 Jan 2009 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    can't wait!!!!

    Author's Response: Soon!  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Downward Spiral 10 Jan 2009 11:25 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...that was really intense! Fantastic, in fact.

    Poor Harry, it seems that darkness is invading his soul, but will severus care and try to do something about it?

    But you know, if I was Harry, I would just say, stuff Hogwarts, stuff Snape, and stuff McGonagall. I would go and pack my belongings and I would head off to Grimmauld Place. But of course, Harry isn't really Harry at the moment is he. He is turning into daddy.

    Loved it. Can't wait for next chapter.

    Lesley

    Author's Response:

    Harry is ready to chuck it in, that is for sure! 

    A leopard doesn't change it's spots does it?  Draco will never change.  He is Slytherin through and through.  He sees only what "he" can get out of any given situation!

Title: Downward Spiral 10 Jan 2009 2:10 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad to see you back, Pandora, and to see another chapter! Of course, now I just want the next chapter even more, lol!

    Boy, things are just getting worse and worse, aren't they? Poor Harry, I'm glad that Minerva and Severus are beginning to notice that Harry's behavior is uncharacteristic and I hope someone will be able to help him soon. That being said, I loved when Harry told Severus that Lily would be ashamed of him and that James had been more of a father than he ever had...that needed to be said and I hope it gives Severus pause.

    Nasty little Draco...I sure hope he gets what's coming to him soon. And the other Slytherins aren't much better...sounds like they really need to be taken in hand.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh thank you!  I'm already working on the next chapter as a matter of fact.  I've been having internet problems, so that is why I haven't been on lately.  That and I've been really sick.

     

    Hopefully that comment to Sev will smarten him up and take notice of his son.

    Draco is a toad isn't he?  He owes Harry big time, and yet he cares only about himself!  Don't worry, Draco will get his!

     

     

     

Title: Downward Spiral 10 Jan 2009 1:45 am
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i couldnt belive Snape's blindness.he couldnt saw draco' plan and he was spy.
    i really hate draco.i hope someone understand and talk with snape about him.
    poor harry.i like whe he say about lily to snape.snape is deserve.
    i think now snape punish harry because of darling godson.

    Author's Response:

    Some things never change, do they?  Harry always ends up getting blamed for Draco's actions!  Not fair really, is it?

     Draco will get what's coming to him, don't worry! ;)

Title: Downward Spiral 10 Jan 2009 1:00 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oopss, what is wrong with our Harry - would be PTSD (post tramautic stress disorder).

    Severus better watch his own house.

    Author's Response:

    Hmm, that's an interesting guess!  Very close, but not quite!  But that is adding to the mix, that's for sure.

     

    Yeah Sev better keep a better eye on his slimy slytherins!  LOL!  Thanks for reviewing!

     

     

Title: Downward Spiral 10 Jan 2009 12:04 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy... Harry's in it deep now. I'm glad that people are starting to notice that something is off about him and that he's being affected by something that is out of his control. I hope they can do something to help him and I hope Snape doesn't go all-out on him next chapter, though I have a feeling that is what will happen.

    Great chapter--update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's really losing control.  Don't worry though, he's got a lot of people who care for him, and will help him get through this rough spot.  Maybe even Snape!

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