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Title: Sensory Overload 21 Jan 2010 6:50 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Holy crap! That was tense! Harry THREW Snape?! What the crap! And then ran away?! Snape will NOT be pleased!

    Poor Harry...poor everyone in Harry's path. :( He's going to feel terrible about this later, but at the moment, I'm more afraid for the other people.

    But he ran away? Where is he going? What's he going to do? Snape's gotta find him! I want Snape of the case!...though I do hope his head's okay. That had to HURT!!

    Excellent chappie!!

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee, I think that Harry has a death wish.  Yeah, Harry is not in his right mind right now, and he WILL feel awful later.

     

    Go Snape go!! :)  Oh, don't worry, he'll find Harry!  I don't know if that's a good or a bad thing!

     

    Thanks Ivy.

Title: Sensory Overload 25 Jan 2009 12:34 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, now that's torn it. Could Harry be under some kind of compulsion from the Drak magic? because leaving Hogwarts is very unwise in his current state, he needs help and the ones who can help him best are right there.

    I thought Minerva's conversation was quite amusing and I'm glad that Severus will finally attempt to have a reconciliation with Harry eventually. Hopefully before whatever dark curse takes him over.

    I know some other reviewer mentioned it was unreasonable for Snape to take harry's wand, but given the circumstances, he acted to protect the other students. I mean, you don't put a gun in the hand of someone who is mentally unstable and expect them to act rationally or leave one lying around where said person can get at it. You take it away before someone gets hurt.

    And while some of the tension between the two is Sev's fault, it's not all his, Harry has been very stubborn, argumentative and plain disrespectful to him and he also holds a grudge, much like his father. They are both very stubborn and will probably but heads continuously until someone bangs their heads together and makes them see sense. Too bad Lily isn't there to do it!

    Maybe she needs to come back and deliver a very pointed message to BOTH her men, hmmm?

    Author's Response:

    Snape may have his faults, but he took Harry's wand away for his own protection.  Could you imagine if Harry had of seriously hurt or killed someone while he was not in control of his acitons.  He wouldn't be able to live with himself.  It IS very dangerous for Harry to be away from Hogwarts.  He needs someone to monitor his mood swings and find a way to rid his system of the Dark Magic that has invaded it.  Severus, while he can be a pain in the butt at times, is really the only person; the BEST person to help Harry.

     

    Yes, they both are very stubborn.  It IS too bad Lily isn't there to kick there butts!  Yes Harry has inherited Sev's tradmark temper alright!

Title: Sensory Overload 22 Jan 2009 11:49 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter again! It's rather scary what's happening to Harry...the idea that he can't remember almost cast Crucio against Malfoy is worrisome, like something really is trying to take him over. Thank goodness that Minerva, Severus, and his friends have recognized it.

    I'm so glad that Severus has finally been shaken...about time too, I'd say. I really want to just shake him, and the fact that he never changed a bit even after learning that Harry was his son is terrible and I hope he feels really guilty about it all at some point. Harry badly needed some support his last few years at Hogwarts.

    So Harry has left now? I have to say good for him because Severus needs to understand that he has to quit abusing his authority with Harry and maybe that will also drive it home to him.

    The whole scene with him wanting to confiscate Harry's wand is such an example of reaping what's he sown. Obviously Harry was wrong to 'attack' him, and it was probably an example of how the Dark Magic is affecting him...but given the history and past abuse he's suffered, I don't blame him one little bit for being unwilling to relinquish his wand, especially to the hated professor who has consistently bullied and harassed him since day one.

    And poor Minerva, the paperwork is always the worst, lol.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, I'm so mad.  I wrote a nice long response, but I'm at work, and somehow it got erased before I pushed the submit button!

     

    Ok, I can't remember all the wise words I had written! Ok, let's start with Harry's wand.  Severus really had no choice but to confiscate it because Harry is dangerous to himself and others right now.  He lacks the self control to prevent himself from killing someone, or himself!  Of course, Sev has no diplomacy and always feels the need to exert his authority in the most unpleasant of manners!  Don't worry though, Sev is going to work on his control issues (well, to a certain extent!) and help Harry overcome his possession of Dark Magic.

     I'm warning you though, Sev is never going to be a "nice" man in this story; nor is the relationship between Harry and Sev ever going to be "fluffy and huggy-kissy, but they WILL come to an understanding, and eventually Sev is going to be there for his son.

     

    Bestill your fluttering heart Lesley; next chapter is already being written. Can you last a few more days? :)  Seriously though, I really appreciate you guys support; it is an honour to have such great encouragement, considering how much I enjoy YOUR stories, and I respect your opinions.

     

     

Title: Sensory Overload 22 Jan 2009 12:12 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I know Harry needs help, but I am so glad he has taken the step to get away from Hogwarts. Why would a grown wizard put up with the garbage he is being forced to if he doesn't have too.

    Of course, what will happen to him now is a problem, and one Snape is going to have to address. Or maybe, now Harry isn't constantly under his nose, he will be able to forget their filial connection and get on with his life...the life HArry returned to him.

    Don't be too long with the next chapter, Dawn. The suspense won't do my heart any good.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Well, as much as Snape's been an arse to Harry, Harry needs his guidance and expertise to get rid of the Dark Magic.  Harry should not be on his own right now, he's dangerous to himself and others with his lack of impulse control.  Snape needs to get a hold of himself, and help Harry get through this.  Don't worry though, Harry and Minerva's words about Lily being ashamed of him, are finally starting to sink in, so hopefully Sev will finally be there for Harry.

     Don't forget though that Snape is basically a very domineering, controlling personality-type, and Harry is very strong-willed as well.  Even if they make progress on their relationship, it will always be a volatile one.  But hey, maybe they can at least learn to co-exist!

    As much as Harry wishes right now to forget all about Snape, Severus is the only one who can really help rid him of the Dark Magic, so they have no choice but to reach an understanding.

    Don't worry though, there is a light at the end of the rainbow; but the path to the pot of gold will be a rocky one!

    Even though Harry is technically of legal age in the Wizarding World, he still is only seventeen, and still needs guidance from those older than him.  Hopefully Sev will be able to eventually give it without lording it over Harry.  But then again, we're talking about Snape here!  :)

     

     

     

Title: Sensory Overload 21 Jan 2009 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Is Snape going to be able to handle Harry this way? I don't think he'll give up, as I think he sees that Harry may become a hazard to the wizarding world at large (with enough time and motivation). They need to find him and fast before he does something and gets himself chucked in Azkaban!

    Great chapter--I think my favorite part was Minerva giving Severus the guilt-trip about Lily. It was sure to work and it was painful, but hopefully Sev will now understand the importance of what he needs to do. If nothing else, at least he'll do it for Lily.

    I think he might change with time though :D.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry is definitely a danger to himself and others, and should not be alone, away from his friends and Minerva, nor even from Snape (as much of a bastard as he's being!) because he needs help and could land himself in serious trouble.

    I think that Harry and Minvera's words about Lily being ashamed of him, are finally starting to penetrate that thick skull of his!

    Sometimes it takes something serious to happen to shock us into action.  The relationship between Harry and Severus will always be difficult and will require great effort between the two of them, but it can only get better from here on out.  Once they are able to rid Harry of the Dark Magic that has him under its control, that is.

     

     

     

Title: Sensory Overload 21 Jan 2009 9:11 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    thanks for new chapter.
    actually im glad harry is left hogwart.now maybe thickheaded snape unserstand his mistake.and i hope snape found malfoy jr.' plan.
    please update soon

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Snape just needed something to get his butt in gear!

     Harry already suspects Malfoy, so it won't be long till Snape does too.  Maybe Draco has done them a favour though.  Maybe the relationship coming out in the open, was what Snape needed to force him to open his eyes.

    I've already started writing the next chapter.

    Thanks for the review! :)


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