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Reviews For An Uncertain Future
But appearance is an important part of identity, nonetheless, and to have one's physical looks change after seventeen years would be a shock. I thought Harry's friends would stick by him and I'm so happy to see that they did. I think that will be a big help to him. Loved Severus' washing his hair and everyone's reactions to it. I can't remember, have you written a reason for why his hair was always greasy? Did it have to do with potions? Because I personally like the idea that it ties in someway, perhaps even subconsciously, with Severus' poor self-esteem and him trying to keep people at an emotional distance. Deliberately making oneself physically unattractive could be a part of that. I'm very worried about the Slytherins' reactions and I hope Severus will keep them in line, but I'm still worried for Harry. And those nightmares are still continuing. That's not good at all. But I'm so glad that Harry is finally learning to depend on his father. I guess it's greedy when you just got this chapter up to say how much I want the next one, but it is meant as a compliment for your awesome story! Author's Response: Yeah, Harry has very ambigious feelings about his new appearance. On one hand, looking like Snape brings them closer, but to have our whole identity change overnight, is quite traumatic. Harry is very conflicted. He likes the idea of looking like Snape, of seeing his true appearance, but he feels like he doesn't know who he is anymore, and he feels guilty about losing a part of James as well. Yes, Harry must learn that his true friends will always stick by him and they care about Harry for who he is on the inside. They've shared too much, for them to just abandon him like that. They would be really shallow otherwise wouldn't they. Ginny's relatiionship with him is a little more complicated. She still cares for him and can logically say that he is still Harry, but it is still a little awkward to put your arms around a virtual starnger, and then to kiss him, well that would be very odd, woudln't it?
I did touch on the reason for Snape's greasy hair earlier in the story I believe, but yes, it does have to do with the fumes from the potions, but also a lac of interest in hygiene . I know what it's like to have oily hair. If I don't wash it every day, it would look like Snapes! So, you can imagine that he is working over a hot cauldron, and doesn't necessarily want to wash his hair constantly, but even if he did, it would just get oily again. I suppose that he cold have developed a potion to keep his hair cleaner for longer periods of time, but he really cares very little for personal appearance. He is not vain at all. As a matter of fact, he always made a concerted effort not to be, and of course others always told him how ugly or greasy he was. I think that he just never thought that he could compete with James Potter's good looks anyway, so why bother trying.
Hmm, yes the nightmares...well those are worrisome, aren't they, but Harry has Severus now at least to confide iin, and to rely on.
Thanks Kristeh, and I'm anxiously awaiting updates on YOUR two wonderful stories!!!
When I first started reading this story I said I was surprised that Harry never spared a thought for James. and he still hasn't. Sev can only really say 'na na na na na, Potter...oh, yeah, thanks for dying to protect my son though!'. At least he thought of James in passing...Harry didn't. I just find that very sad. Anyway, that's just me. Good side effect of the ritual though, having Sev's scars disappear, although I am not entirely sure how that happened as the ritual was directed at Harry. I am sure Ginny won't find any fault with Harry's new looks. It seems he is good looking now where he looked like James potter before. Sorry if I sound down, but as I said, I found this chapter very sad as it was the end of so much, even if it is the beginning of so much more. Lesley~ Author's Response: I understand how you feel, but don't forget that Severus is Harry's father in this story, not James, so Harry's appearance was a lie. Harry's eyes only very slightly changed from before, they are still bascially a replica of Lily's. I wanted Harry to still have something of Lily.
As far as Severus' feelings towards James goes, don't forget that there is a lot of water uner the bridge between the two men but despite that he has realised despite his grudge against James, that the man sacrificed his life for his sons, and he is actually very appreciative. Harry has had a lot to deal with, and finding out he is not in fact James' son has been very difficulat for him. I also think that Harry is in shock right now. It has really hit home that his whole identity was a lie, and it's a lot to deal with. I think that he has showed the proper respect for James, and he is having a hard time dealing with his looks, because he seems very unsure of himself. Part of this story, is to bring Severus and Harry closer, and I just felt that having Severus actually be able to see that Harry is his son, and not just know it in his heart, will really enforce that closeness and bonding that has been difficult for the both of them.
No one is forgetting about James, but Harry really never knew the man, and Severus was not close to him, so it is normal that they will concentrate on their own relationship and not have James Potter on their mind. There will always be a special place in Harry's heart for the man that sacrificed his life for him, but now he has to move on and put the past behind him. That doesn't mean that James contribution to his life is any less important, but he has to live his life now, and concentrate on forming a relationship with Severus, which is the focus of this story. I had planned on other ways down the road for Harry to honour James, but I didn't want to focus too much on a ghost. My main goal is to have Harry and Severus grow closer. As far as the ritual goes, the premise of the White Magic is that is so strong that, as in the ritual with the Dark Magic, it affects everyone in the room because of the backlasth. The reason that in the Dark Ritual, Harry was more affected, was because he was the once that actually cast the final spell to extract the soul from the Horcrux. White Magic works on a different principle. It almost is like a powerful vacuum that reverses negative energy in the air, so Severus was able to benefit from it's stray magical energy.
Update soon please!!!!! -P.G. Author's Response: Sorry, but it just seemed to naturally end there! I like the fact that the ritual cleansed both their souls, and allowing them to have a fresh start. I think that even though Snape was beginning to care deeply for Harry before the change, I think that now that he can actually see the change, it really hits home for Severus that Harry is his son. Harry's friends? Well you'll have to wait and see! (Evil cackle)
I'll try to update soon.
Sev must have a recessive eye color gene in his DNA though in order for Harry's eyes to have been green instead of dark, since generally a dark eye color is dominant. Sorry, I was just discussing genetics with my nephew, explaining how he got his curly hair. Personally, I think it would have been funny if Harry inherited Sev's nose, they say that a large nose means you have a great deal of personality. I was also very happy to see that Severus' Dark mark and scars are gone, it must be such a relief! I hope nobody says anything derogatory about the new Harry. Author's Response: To be honest with you, in my original draft, I had Harry's eyes go quite a bit darker green, but I changed it because I just didn't have the heart to take the one thing off of Harry that he prized so much and brought him so close to his mother. So I settled for making his eyes slightly darker! It would have been funny to have a big nose like Sev, or more hawk-like, but i figured the poor kid had enough to deal with already! LOL! Actually, I took a page out of your book for taking reviwers suggestions into consideration while writing the story. One reader asked if Severus would be able to cleanse his soul as well, since he had committed many unspeakable acts in the past, and I thought that it was a brilliant idea. The change in Harry's appearance was also at the request of a reviewer. It is very enjoyable to have readers discuss what they'd like to see in the story, and I always appreciated that about you. Well, there will probably be some that will bother Harry about his looks, probably Slytherins--Oh well, on second thought maybe not. I don't think they'd want to mess with their Head of House.
Author's Response: Hey, you're over here! Didn't you read my story at fanfiction?!
I just really am amazed at how well you describe Harry and Severus' thoughts and emotions. You write them with such depth. It's easy to feel what they feel and to understand them. I love when an author can really get inside a character's head, and bring the reader along too. I can imagine that this is quite a shock for Harry, and that he feels very disoriented and doesn't know quite what to think about it all. The advantages are first, that the ritual worked and he's free from the taint of dark magic. Another good thing is that I think Harry's changed appearance has truly helped Severus to see Harry as his son. Of course he had already accepted Harry as his, but with Harry still looking so much like James, I imagine that there was a lingering sense of...well, I'm not sure exactly the word I'm looking for, because Severus had accepted Harry and was even learning to love him so 'resentment' and 'doubt' are not appropriate. But I think this is finally allowing Severus to let go of the past, and his own inhibitions and see Harry as both his son and a link to Lily, and a unique person in his own right. So maybe it's easier for Severus to put the past behind him now. But it's probably going to take Harry a while to adjust! But Harry is still the same person that he's always been, and I do hope that Ron, Hermione, and Ginny will understand that and will be supportive. Surely, after all they've been through at this point, they won't let a relatively minor thing like physical appearance affect their relationship. I hope... I love Severus' thoughts about fatherhood! Sev is really becoming quite mushy...for him, that is! But I love this side of him, and I think it is totally believable because you have taken the time to slowly develop the relationship. Of course, I have no illusions that Severus is a completely different person. I'm sure he can still be snarky and ornery as ****. And I'm sure that his relationship with his son is not going to be all smooth sailing from here on out either. But I am so glad to see them becoming closer. I loved the little talk between them where Harry was wanting to live with Severus, at least part of the time, and Severus was trying to reassure him that he was always welcome. I was proud of them. They might have been a little hesitant at first, but they each got their message across in the end. And I love that the white magic ritual cleansed Severus, too! Now, I know you updated really quickly, and I'm so grateful, but it just makes me want the next chapter even more! Great job, as always! Author's Response: I wanted it to be a complete surprise, but PG was way too perceptive, and I guess that you were too!! Yeah, Harry was handsome before, but now he's stunning with Sev's fine-boned features and just enough of Lily's features to soten the angles. He's got the advantage now as well, that he doesn't have the glasses to hide his beautiful eyes, so he's still a handsome young man. I love how Severus and Harry have come a long way in their relationship. Severus will probably always have a hard time showing physically how he feels, but I think that he is starting to feel a little more comfortable to express to Harry how he feels. He'll never be a demonstrative man, and he's not suddenly going to be a "nice" man, but I think that Harry's new appearance has made Severus really see that Harry is his son. Although, he had already grown to care for Harry deeply, I don't think that until now, it's really hit him that Harry is really a part of him. He, of course, put aside the fact that Harry looked like his archenemy, and was able to look deeper and care for Harry for who he was, it wasn't until he could see the extraordinary resemblance between the two of them, that the final peice of the puzzle was completed, so to speak. I think that for the first time in Severus' life, he felt incompetant at something, and that was not a pleasant feeling for him. He felt vulnerable and unsure of himself, and of course he tried to hide it by being gruff and cold. Thank goodness that Harry has come to understand this about his father, and help Severus overcome his feelings of inadequacy. I think perhaps that it has been very difficult for Harry as well. He's not used to being a son either. He's never had a real parent to be concerned over his safety or welfare, and is more like Severus in the feelings department, more than he realises. It's hard for Harry to show emotion as well, because he's been hurt over and over again. Everytime he gets close to someone, he loses them. He doesn't want to lose Severus too, so he's been rather defiant and sometimes downright insolent to hide HIS feelings of insecurity and uncertaintty. Yes, our boys have come a long way.
I appreciate your compliment and that you feel that I've been able to express the characters' emotions and feelings, but I thinkt that about YOU!!! No, things are not suddenly going to be smooth sailing, as you put it, from here onward, but I think that they've past a major milestone in their relationship. I think that they're both happy that they didn't throw in the towel, and took the extra effort to get to know each other, because the rewards are endless.
I hadn't thought of having Severus benefit from the ritual, but a reviewer at fanfiction.net asked me if Severus' soul would be cleansed from the ritual as well, and I thought that it was a superb idea. Oh, and the idea to have Harry's appearance change, was at the request from another reviewer over there. My goodness, it's like my reviewers are writing my story for me!!! LOL! Seriously though, I thought that they were brilliant ideas, and I was happy to incorporate them into the plot because I think that it will add spice to the story line. At least I hope I can do it justice! I'll try to update quickly!
Thanks Kristeh, and I am so so so excited at reading YOUR next chappie. I'll take an update on either SC OR APOP!!
Author's Response: LOL!! Hmmm...you'll have to wait and see! Interesting suggestions though! All I "will" say, is that it is going to be a shock for Hary's friends and WILL turn everyone's world upside down. It should be really fun! Of course, that depends on your definition of fun! :)
I loved the interaction between them in the morning, though. That was so realistic and believable. I could just picture them. Their relationship is still tentative, and new for both of them. They're still figuring it out and trying to overcome barriers, but they are reaching out to one another. And though they both have a temper, their stubbornness can be an advantage, too. I think they've reached the point where, even though the road ahead may be rocky, they're both determined to keep on reaching out to one another. I think neither one would be willing to give up the relationship now. I had to chuckle at the scene with Draco, though I was concerned as well. It's really not like Harry to be antagonistic. The details for the ritual were amazing, but did you have to end on that cliffhanger! Now I can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Thanks. I won't give too many details about the nightmares, because it is an integreal part of the plot line to follow and the dreams are an important lead-in to that. Severus and Harry have been side-tracked but they will discuss the dreams at length soon. Severus and Harry have a lot to learn about being father and son. They really have no role models to follow, do they? Severus' own father was extremely abusive and the Dursleys were never really a family to Harry and his Uncle was definitely not a model father to Harry's cousin, and nowhere near a father-figure to harry. There is also a power struggle going on here. Harry is consumed with Dark thoughts and is at the mercy of his uncontrolllable emotions, and Severus is definitely used to being in control. They have to learn to meet each other half-way, and there are so many obstacles blocking the way. Only time will bring them closer.
Yeah, the scene between Harry and Draco was really fun to write. I can't help it, I know it's out of character, but Draco really deserved a little of his own medicince. Besides, Harry's tired of being a good little boy, and turning the other cheek! LOL!
The ritual was fun to write too, but I'm sure that my Latin is horribly wrong. I just hope that anyone who is proficient in Latin is not judging me too harshly. Sorry, never learnt the language! LOL!
Author's Response: Blushes. Thank you so much. I can't take credit for thinking of the idea since it was a challenge and a brillinat one, but I appreciate that you think I've done it justice.
Author's Response: "Sorry," she says sheepishly. "I'll do better next time." "Thanks for the compliment," she says, and takes a bow! :) " "Next one will be up soon," she promises, and crosses her fingers that she can deliver! |
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