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Title: Cruel To Be Kind 03 Dec 2008 5:38 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    im worried if severus care jr malfoy harry will more feel badly.
    poor harry he have friends but actually they couldnt understand harry' senses.
    i hope snape will close harry soon

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry feels very alone right now, but so does Snape--although he would never admit it!  Snape cares for Malfoy because Malfoy is a Slytherin, and his student, but I don't think his feelings go THAT deep.  Of course, harry could very well misinterpret them, as he is feeling very vulnerable right now!

Title: Unconditional Love 26 Nov 2008 1:15 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry has Ginny there to talk to and to give him advice and I hope Albus gets his act together and speaks to severus and Harry soon and helps to undo what he did, the damned fool! Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.   Yeah, poor Harry, he feels quite rejected and vulnerable right now.  Aw Dumbledore, people are not puppets!

     Oh, I noticed that you have updated as well, I'll go check it out! ;)

Title: Unconditional Love 25 Nov 2008 6:28 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the groundwork you've laid, also Ginny's reaction to all of Harry's revelations. It's good he's going to have her in his corner.
    Now I'm interested in seeing what you do to--uh, I mean WITH--Severus.

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee!  And she cackles evily.  What to do with Sev...hmm...good question.  Got any suggestions?  I've got a few ideas in mind!  ;)

     Yes, Ginny is in Harry's corner, at least for now! ;)  Hee hee! evil cackling again!

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Unconditional Love 25 Nov 2008 12:45 am
Reviewer: Slythami (Signed) [Report This]
    Always knew I liked Ginny ... Update soon! I loved it!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I like Ginny alot too.  I guess I'm just a romantic at heart;  I think that they were always meant to be together, and Ginny was patient enough to wait until Harry felt the same way that she did.
Title: Bittersweet 24 Nov 2008 10:03 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting! :D I look forward to seeing how this progresses! Two quick suggestions, though—one, the plot does seem to be moving along rather fast; and two, I'd try to use less italics. I know they're tempting to use for emphasis, but it can be kind of distracting.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review.  I will take your suggestions into consideration.  I hadn't meant to use italics too much to emphasize, only as an indication of Harry's thoughts.  I have just noticed your review now, so I did not take into consideration for chapter five, but I will definitely see if I can work on that. As far as plot moving rather fast, do you mean that Harry brought Snape back too fast?  It would be really helpful if you would clarify that for me, so I can see where I might be speeding it up too fast. 

    This is my first story, so I'm bound to need improvement, and I will take your constructive critisicm to heart, and hopefully improve my writing.  That's how we learn, is it not?  By other's experience.  Thank you.

Title: Unconditional Love 24 Nov 2008 9:54 pm
Reviewer: gin. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    thanks for new chapter.
    im worried ginny' reactions.but now im happy ginny is harry'side.poor boy
    im wonder how act snape opposite to slytherins and harry.

    Author's Response:

    Ginny loves Harry very much, and will always stand by his side; unless he pushes her away, that is.

     Now Snape is another matter altogether.  He has some serious attitude adjustments to make, and it is going to take something dramatic to happen, for him to change his mindset about Harry.  Thank Goodness Harry has McGonagall and Ginny on his side; Snape doesn't stand a chance! ;)

Title: Conflict and Manipulation 16 Nov 2008 6:45 am
Reviewer: murgy31 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great!

    Author's Response: Thank you.  I really appreciate all the kind words. This is my very first story ever, so it is encouraging to receive such nice support and encouragement. 
Title: Bittersweet 16 Nov 2008 3:16 am
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooh things are getting interesting. I wonder what McGonagall is going to do. :)

    Author's Response: Hee Hee, McGonagall has a few cards up her sleeve!  He doesn't stand a chance against her determination!  Thanks for taking the time to review!
Title: Lost Souls 15 Nov 2008 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm going to cry now. I can't believe Snape has been such a git, his son just saved his damn life. I love this story and I can't wait until I read more. :)

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, this is the Snape that we all know and love, or hate as the case may be! ;)  Don't worry though, Minerva will not rest until she gets these two together.  She's a very determined woman! ;)

Title: Dumbledore's Betrayal 15 Nov 2008 4:20 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow this first chapter got me hooked. I can't wait until I read more. :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you so much for reviewing.  I should be updating in the next couple of days!


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