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Title: Dumbledore's Betrayal 21 Jul 2011 9:47 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    *flails*

    OMG! What a great start - loving it, already! ^^

    Author's Response: Wow Thanks, your opinion means a lot to me DP.
Title: New Beginnings & Past Regrets 21 Jul 2011 8:40 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so sorry to hear about your father!

    And I am very glad you have returned. This story is one of my very faves! I am glad the new movie has sparked up your muses again!

    REally great chapter! and so so so excited to have you back. I will be here till the end!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Title: New Beginnings & Past Regrets 21 Jul 2011 8:40 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so sorry to hear about your father!

    And I am very glad you have returned. This story is one of my very faves! I am glad the new movie has sparked up your muses again!

    REally great chapter! and so so so excited to have you back. I will be here till the end!

    Author's Response: thanks so much. I am determined to finish this story, but I never thought that it would take me so long to do it. I'm sorry for the long spaces between updates, and I promise to do better.
Title: New Beginnings & Past Regrets 21 Jul 2011 8:10 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am sorry for your loss, on the 17th it was 23 yrs since I lost my father and I still miss him.
    "appreciate perfection you have to live through hell" Hmm wouldn't Harry already have lived thru it with the Dursley's and Severus? Maybe its Ron's turn since he is always so jealous of Harry's fame. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I lost my mother in 1996 and I still miss her too. I know that this is all a part of life, but it doesn't make it easier to bear at times.

     

    Yeah, Harry did live through hell, but he deserves happiness now. Well, I think that Ron is jealous but he still loves Harry. 

Title: New Beginnings & Past Regrets 21 Jul 2011 7:02 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Pandora, I'm so thrilled that you're writing again. I know how difficult these past months have been for you, and I only wish that I were able to do more.

    What a fantastic chapter! I loved the beginning with Harry and Severus enjoying the holidays and each other's company (What a long way they've come!). They both deserve to have a loving family and I'm so glad that they've found, and are learning to love, one another.

    Of course though, I'm concerned about the article that Severus was reading, and wanted to spare Harry from. It seems that something is wrong and Narcissa suspects so, too. Surely Voldemort is truly gone? I'm eager to see how you develop this.

    And I like how you are portraying the Malfoys. I can easily see Lucius being the way you depict him. Despite his faults, he does truly love his family, but pride and tradition keep him from showing it, and his prejudices and high expectations could make him almost abusive at times.

    I can't wait for another chapter, so I hope you're already writing!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Kristeh. You always leave such lovely reviews.

     

    Harry and Snape are finally feeling more comfortable with each other and cherishing the bond that is forming. Unfortunately, there are dark times ahead that could spoil the peace that they've all worked so hard for.

     

    I think that Lucius and Narcissa have really had to re-examine their values. I think that they deserve to be given a second chance.

     

    Thanks so much for all your support these past couple of months especially. I really value your friendship and your opinion. Oh, and I'm so looking forward to another chapter from you too. 

Title: New Beginnings & Past Regrets 21 Jul 2011 6:58 am
Reviewer: silver-slytherin65 (Signed) [Report This]
    lovely, i want more.
    i love snape's reaction to the idea of becoming a grandla.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, I think that secretly he really does want to be a grandpa someday. Maybe just not yet.
Title: Dumbledore's Betrayal 11 Apr 2011 4:39 am
Reviewer: Bullet Soul (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! Kristeh told me if I continued to have trouble with registering that I should come to you. She said that you create your own password. How? There's not a space to fill in on the registration. I have no idea what to do! Great chapter by the way.

    Author's Response: Oh dear. I'm sorry that I only saw this now. You should send a pm to ObsidianEmbrace. I'll let her know.
Title: Christmas Cheer 06 Apr 2011 10:06 pm
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    ahhhh please say you are planning to continue with this story! i read this all in one go and absolutely LOVED it! :) please please please update soon?? xx

    Author's Response: Oh thanks so much. Yes, I am just having a little writer's block, health problems and a death in the family all within the space of a couple of months, but I'm going to work on it soon. I just need to get started! LOL.
Title: Christmas Cheer 27 Mar 2011 12:22 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    I am soooo glad I found this story! Its' my fave so far I think. I feel it's very realistic the way you've written Harry and Sev's "father/son" relationship, and their coming together. I adore your story!

    I think the way you've written Sev is very realistic as well. I too think he would stay very rigid with some softening at the edges were Harry to come into his life.

    Well Done!

    Can't wait to read more!! Love this story!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. I apologise for the long wait in updating, but I have had some serious health problems, and a death in the family, and some writing's block in their as well. I promise that I will update soon.
Title: To Be Jolly 16 Aug 2010 4:40 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, Pandora, these last two chapters are some of my favorites of any fanfic that I've read. It's just so wonderful to see Severus and Harry sharing a happy Christmas together. They both deserve it, and it's really heart-warming to see how close they've grown.

    It's hard to name my favorite parts, because reallly I'd be quoting the whole chapter, lol, but I had to grin when Severus tried the flavored beans. I got tears in my eyes when Severus was looking at Lily's picture (Harry gave him the perfect gift!), and also at the end, when Severus can finally say that he's happy and grateful for the second chance that Harry gave him.

    I also liked how he had given Harry so many gifts and acknowledged to himself how Harry has also been affected by his past with the Dursleys, and you handled the situation with the Malfoys coming for dinner just perfectly!

    I'm excited for the next chapter, and for more of your other stories too!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Kristeh. It was actually fun to write these Christmas scenes; it's my favourite time of the year, and I wanted it to be special for Harry and Severus.  

     

    I thought that it would be nice for Severus to be spoilt at Christmas too. Even though he's made many mistakes, he's trying hard now to be a good father to Harry.

     

    I'll try to be better at updating next time.


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