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Title: Conflict and Manipulation 20 Jan 2010 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Pandora, what have you done to Severus? Making him Potions AND DADA Professor along with Head of House AND Deputy Headmaster...he's going to be a busy boy, isn't he? I have a feeling that he's not going to like it very much though...at least at first. Tempers are going to get real hot, real soon, me thinks, me thinks...

    "Yes Albus, there is nothing more I would rather be doing than having someone administer a foul tasting potion, rip my mind apart and expose my deepest thoughts and feelings for all the world to view. Because of course, you know what a demonstrative person I am," Severus said sarcastically.- And that's why we love you Sevvy!! ^_^ That was a great line and sounded A LOT like Snape. I think this was my favorite line in this section, but then it was all good!

    Ha! You go Minerva! You put your foot down! She made me happy in this. OH! And Harry being embarrassed that Hermione and Ron were *cough* "snuggling" was hilarious. Poor Harry...

    Great chappie Pandora! Now I've gotta go to the next! :D

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I thought that I'd torture Snape a bit! But there is a reason for my madness, as you'll see.  Yeah, Snape and his legendary temper! LOL!

     Thanks, I had so much fun writing a nasty Snape!

     I love Minerva. She's almost the only one that can really handle Snape! She puts him in his place.

     

    Hee hee. I think that Harry wanted to do a little of his own snuggling too.

     

    Thanks for reviewing Ivy.

Title: Drastic Measures 20 Jan 2010 9:30 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh, my review didn't go through. Let's see what I remember.

    Great chapter, Pandora. I was happy to see this story on the update list. I could feel Harry's anticipation for Christmas here and I can't wait to read how he'll decorate the house.

    I'm surprised that Harry still wants to be an Auror or is still considering it considering everything that has happened to him. I'm wondering how the information session will go for him. If it'll help him decide one way or the other.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. Yeah, he's like a big kid.  Poor Sev, Harry's going to go all out in decorating!

     

    Well, I think that being an Auror is something Harry has wanted for a long time, and I know that many fanfiction authors have him choose another career, but I'm trying to stick with Canon as much as I possibly can in this story. Obviously, much of it is AU, but I still like to try to keep to Canon where I'm able to and since Harry became an Auror, I'm sticking with that.

     Well, there IS an information session, but that is not the only reason that Harry is going to the Ministry.

    Oh, I can't wait for an update from you too!! :)

Title: Bittersweet 20 Jan 2010 8:42 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! (have I said that too much?) Minerva heard it all? Oh man! What's she going to think or do?

    I feel so bad for both Harry and Snape in this one. They just don't know what to do. Harry's disappointed and feeling rejected while Severus is still guilty and bitter. Poor boys! My heart's bleeding for them both!

    "he had been living on the edge for so long, that the prospect of normalcy seemed foreign to him."- I think that this is very true for Snape. I often wondered how his life would have really been like had he lived. It would be such a switch, wouldn't it? And it'd be terrifying! To crave this statue all your adult life, to want it so badly you hurt, but then finally accept your fate only to be given what you wanted so quickly you can't even appreciate the gift, as it only makes you bitter in away...do know what I'm saying or am I just rambling?

    Fantastic chapter Pandora! But I'll have to read on tomorrow as it's late and I have early classes. Expect more from me later! :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I think that you put it beautifully Ivy. Snape had accepted death, and was actually awaiting it with welcome arms, so it was a bit of a disappointment to him that he wouldn't be reunited in death with Lily and now he 's faced with a life with a son that he doesn't know, and since he's never been very good at dealing with emotions, he lashes out at Harry as the source of his ambigious emotions.

     

    Yes, Snape would never admit that he's scared would he?

     

     Thanks Ivy, your reviews mean a lot to me. I can't wait for an update from you too! :)  Any story of yours will do; I love them all!

Title: Lost Souls 20 Jan 2010 8:10 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!! Poor Harry! This wasn't what I was expecting at all! After all that trouble, Snape was still very much Snape. I understand that he didn't want Harry's soul risked, but still...poor boy. I hope Ron doesn't get in an 'I told you so.' Poor Harry!

    What's going to happen now? Is Harry going to go all dark or isn't he? Is Snape going to help him? I don't know!-so I'm going on!

    Nice chappie Pandora!

    Author's Response:

    Snape is pretty much a bastard in this story--or at least at the beginning. He won't be forever though, I promise you that. He won't ever be a cuddly Snape, but he'll eventually come around.

     

    Ooh, you'll have to keep on reading to find out!!

    Thanks Ivy. I hopt that you'll continue to read. I appreciate your kind comments! :)

Title: Dumbledore's Betrayal 20 Jan 2010 7:32 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!! Snape had a horcrux?!?! Does that mean that his soul is twisted now, like Voldy's was? Does having a horcrux make a person evil because it's unnatural and you had to murder someone to get it?...had it been created when he killed Dumbledore, and he wanted it so that he could come back and tell Harry everything? OMG!!!!

    Pandora, what a start to a story! I'm just shocked! In a good way mind you, so no worries. I really think I'm going to love this story too!

    "Snape was fed information only at intervals to keep him in line; to do Dumbledore's bidding."- for some reason this line hit me hard. It just gave me this sad, pitiful feeling, like I had watched Dumbledore lie to Snape over the years and was forced to keep quiet or something. Very powerful!

    Wonderful start! You've got me hooked on this one too, so I'm going on! :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh Thanks Ivy. Actually, the Horcrux was created by Voldemort's Deatheaters before Snape killed Dumbledore. Don't forget, at one time, Snape was a real Deatheater, before he became a spy, and he was not a nice person. No sugarcoating it here.  But Snape did not create the Horcrux willingly; he only did so on Voldie's orders, so he was  not pleased when Harry used it to bring him back. Fortunately, Snape only created one Horcrux, not like Vodie, who created seven.  It's not so much the Horcrux that makes the person evil, but splitting your soul into multiple pieces can have a devastating effect on you and your soul.

     Thanks Ivy. I answered a challenge actually, so I can't take credit for the premise behind the story; which I thought was brilliant, and just had to write it.

     Dumbledore is not as bad as that line makes him sound; he had his reasons for not trusting Snape. After all, the man was a Deatheater, and for all Dumbledore knew, he was not to be trusted. He did start out truly believing Voldemorts doctrines on Pureblood racism, so Dumbledore was not going to trust him fully with not only a vulnerable child of the light, like Harry, but with the future of the Wizarding World.

     

    Dumbledore knew that Snape loved Lily, and was remorseful for his part in her death, but he really didn't know to what extent the man was sorry for his part in Voldemort's destruction. Even if Snape did not enjoy killing, and only did so because he would have been killed himself, does not change the fact that he is not a saint.

     While Dumbledore made many mistakes in this story, I do not wiish him to be portray as really evil, just a little eccentric and slightly manipulative.

     

    Thanks Ivy, and I'm looking forward to your next chappie too.

Title: Downward Spiral 11 Nov 2009 8:26 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Voldemort has got to behind all this. I'm glad I haven't been at this site for a while, since now I'll have the pleasure of reading chapters in sequence--at least till I get to the most recent one! Fine storytelling, here.

    Author's Response: Aw...you'll see. There are a few surprises in store.  Thanks so much for your kind wors.
Title: Transformations 25 Oct 2009 1:09 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I did enjoy the bonding... Sev has come a long way. It's nice to see him loosening up, even if he has to let go by degrees. He has lived as a bitter, angry lonely man for a long time.

    Sorry it has taken me so long to read the last two chapters, I have had the alerts filesd though, I just hasd to get enough time.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I was really worried that the chapter would be too boring, because nothing exciting happened.  I know Snape's progression to humanity is slow, but it wouldn't be realistic otherwise. As you said, he lived as a bitter, angry lonely man for a long time. I have to remind myself while writing also, that Harry is older in this story than in most, so their relationship and acceptance of each other as father and son, will take a bit longer than in other fics, where Harry is younger. A younger Harry will be much more hungry for a father and a home than an adult Harry would. Although the desire is still there, obviously, there is not the need to escape the Dursleys in this story, so Harry has not been in as much of a hurry as if he had of been younger.

     

    Don't worry about it Lesley. I understand about RL, trust me on that!!

     

     

Title: A Place to Call Home 25 Oct 2009 12:38 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry... detention during the hols. Not so good having your father be a teacher at your school, huh?

    I have to admit that Severus being fond of his home at Spinner's End threw me; I am so attuned to the fact that Severus loathed his father and his Muggle upbringing so much, he joined the Dark Lord's murderous club.

    Also, the picturesque, fairy-tale type village took me aback because the town in which Spinner's End is situated in canon was a northern mill town like Manchester... a town that was once extremely ugly and populous. It is one of the larger cities in northern England. Spinner's End is the name of a street within the town and the houses belonged to mill workers before the mill shut down. It was probably a steel mill; the disused chimney could be seen from Spinner's End.

    But this is your story and I will just have to get my head around your changes.

    Harry's excitement was infectious though and it is lovely to see him looking forward to this, his first Christmas with a parent... that he can remember anyway.

    Is this Susan going to be a love interest for Sev?

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, well Snape will be Snape.

     

    I believe I did say at the beginning of the chapter, and if I didn't, I will rectify that, that I knew that Spinner's End was in an industrial part of town, but I've changed things a bit for the purposes of the story. I wanted Harry to have a home with Severus, but Spinner's End in  Canon, sounded so dreary, and I wanted it to be in a quiet country village instead of the dirty sooty city.

     

    It wouldn't have been much fun for Harry to go to the real Spinner's End, as described in the books for Christmas, in the middle of a busy city. I also know you don't like "Manors" so I twisted things around a bit.  Hope you don't mind too much me playing around with Canon.

     

    No, Susan will not be a love interest for Severus. Perhaps much later, but I really want to focus on Harry and Severus' relationship for now, and there are other events that will be occuring shortly, that I don't want to distract from, with a romance at this point.

Title: Through the Fog 23 Oct 2009 8:50 am
Reviewer: Catalpa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My parents never had to confront me because I made a choice not to drink or smoke. Both my parents smoked and my mother was an alcoholic. My younger brother, on the other hand, chose to drink and smoke. Go figure! Two kids with identical influences go in opposite directions! I don't have kids, but I can certainly empathize with Snape's position: how do you/CAN you get the message across to your child? And how do you persuade without alienating? In the end, the scary aspect is that it still comes down to a matter of choice over which the parent has no real control. Great chapter! Hope some young people take the lesson!

    Just a note: about halfway through the chapter, during Snape's lecture, he says something about smearing the name of an EXTINGUISHED wizard institution. I'm assuming that you meant DISTINGUISHED?

    Author's Response:

    Omg!! That's too funny.  Thanks for catching that.  Oops...

     

    There is a grand debate, isn't there, of whether nurture or nature plays a role in behaviour and choices we make. I had a difficult childhood and I could have made the decision to become an alcoholic, become addicted to drugs etc... but I didn't and I sometimes wonder how I managed to remain sane through it all. Of course whether I'm sane or not is a matter of opinion amongst my family and friends. LOL!  Seriously though, I think that it's a combination and some people are stronger and can resist peer pressure. Adults that you can count on would certainly make a difference, but it is not a prerequisite, as I didnt' have that, and I think that I turned out not too bad.

     

    Thanks for your review and thanks for pointing out the blunder. I'll go back and change it.

Title: Transformations 21 Oct 2009 3:17 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    If I could give you more than a ten I would.

    Author's Response:

    Oh my, that is so sweet of you to say!!! Thank you so much!

     

    (Doing the happy dance!) 

     

     Here...have a chocolate frog!


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