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Reviews For Rainbow Of Grey
Title: Bad Guy 18 Feb 2009 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you British? I noticed you didn't say Mr. but Mr as I think the British do. Or are you good with Briticisms? Really good chapter, perhaps longer next time? Please? :)

    Author's Response: I am British, yes. I'm really no good at writing long chapters; they just end up sounding forced.
Title: Child 18 Feb 2009 4:33 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Try starting sentences differently. A lot of them start with He. I liked Harry watching Snape, I imagine he would look like a hawk with those dark eyes. Good chapter! Thanks for posting!
Title: Freak 18 Feb 2009 4:29 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    What is the quote at the end of the chapter? I reconized the Bible passage, but not the rest. Interesting, can't wait to see how you write Snape!

    Author's Response:

    The quote is from Fairytale.

    I can't wait to see how I write Snape either! *Is nervous*

Title: Child 11 Feb 2009 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I didn't realize you were planning to continue this. I'm so glad I caught sight of chapter 2, as I enjoyed it very much. Once again, I love the whimical tone to it.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It seems to be how I write. Which is nice! It's nice to have a style. :)
Title: Child 11 Feb 2009 7:01 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I loved that part so much even in Canon, when Harry's eyes grew wide at all the food that appeared at the opening feast!

    Nice beginning, I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I thought it was sweet too.

    The next chapter should be up soon. Promise.

Title: Freak 31 Dec 2008 4:33 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! That was interesting and unique. I really enjoyed reading your story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Freak 21 Dec 2008 12:49 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is beautiful, but so sad. I hope Severus will come soon and help Harry. The poor kid needs somebody!

    Author's Response: He will, I promise!
Title: Freak 04 Dec 2008 6:07 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'm so glad you're continuing this a little longer. Fairytale was so poignant and sad, but I'm looking forward to seeing in expanded. The thing about Harry writing his name whenever he could is extremely sad. Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Well, I enjoyed writing Fairytale so much, and it was more popular than I expected, so I thought, well, what the heck.rnrnThe thing with Harry writing his name is that often in fanfiction, you have the idea of Harry not knowing his name until starting at school, because the Dursleys never called him that, and often authors have him writing it on his cupboard, usually as a plot device so Snape or whoever can know that's where Harry slept, but I thought if a little boy was never called his name at home, surely he'd want to write it everywhere, especially if he had no possessions. It seems to me that the only thing Harry ever had was his name.
Title: Freak 04 Dec 2008 4:32 am
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    A promising start indeed. You have my attention, well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Freak 04 Dec 2008 3:30 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Harry! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm anxious to see what role Snape takes in Harry's life. He sure as heck needs a protector, the poor little guy.

    Very nice start, please update soon!

    Author's Response: I shall hopefully update soon. Snape will be there in the next chapter, but not a large part until chapter three at least.

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