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Title: Part Two 10 Apr 2009 6:29 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how you're developing Severus here and showing how his relationship with Lily grows and changes. And I'm still trying to figure out what Lily is fixing in the past and I loved the scene with Sev and baby Harry. Will Harry ever find out the truth?

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I think this is one of the nicest fanfiction compliments I've ever received; thank you so much!  I'm glad you like their changing relationship as much as I do.  A lot of things have happened in these characters' lives and they are definitely affected by them in my fic.  As for Lily, that information will come in good time.  The baby scene was my favorite too--I just love baby scenes so much!  I'm sure baby Harry will make another appearance in this fic at some point because I just can't get enough of him.  I think I can safely say that Harry will find out the truth in this fic, though I'm not going to tell you how or what he thinks of about it :D.  That will come in time as well.

    I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic.  Thank you for your support!

    -P.G. 

Title: Part Two 10 Apr 2009 5:10 am
Reviewer: Alx Black (Anonymous) [Report This]
    While this is a somewhat strange format, I actually don't find it difficult to read at all. The mystery is fun. I like trying to figure out what each of "it"s or "he"s is and eventually being proved right or wrong. Personally, I would be happy if it went on for more than four chapters :P

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you're enjoying my fic Alx!  It's nice to know that you've found it easy to read; I was worried about that.  As for the format, I thought I'd try something new.  I'm not sure that it's going over too well, but those who have reviewed tell me that it is understandable, so that's good.  I think you really understand what I'm getting at though:  I wanted you guys to piece together the mystery I've created!  I'm glad you caught onto my little "he" and "it" game, lol.  Some passages were indeed written in such a way that you might not know which character it applies to.  I'm glad you caught onto that--your review has made me very happy!  Thanks so much for reading!

    -P.G. 

Title: Part Two 09 Apr 2009 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, It was really uncertain about the premise of the fic, but a few time switches in, you won me over! Write more soon, and I now know what you mean by a scene that had to unfold slowly, really really fantastic.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Attack!  I'm glad you gave this a chance!  This has been incredibly challenging because I have to keep track of what I've given away and what I haven't while writing.  I think it's turning out pretty well though and I'm very happy that you liked it.  Thank you for your nice compliments!

    -P.G. 

Title: Part Two 09 Apr 2009 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Omg you have to update this soon (cause I know you just did) and im glad i ddnt have to wait for the second chapter but that won't make it any easier to wait for the third!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again for reading!  I will try to get more of this out soon, once I've finished my P&S challenge fic.  Really, I think this fic makes the most sense if it is read cover to cover all at once, so hopefully I'll get most of the confusion cleared up with the next two chapters.  Thanks again for your support!

    -P.G. 

Title: Part Two 09 Apr 2009 5:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you naughty girl! You have made us wait so long for an update to this amazing story. I'd forgotten about it, and that's a tragedy because it is so well written and so unique.

    I can't wait for more, and I hope that you definitely making it a lot longer than just a couple of chapters!

    I can't wait for Harry to find out one day that Severus is his father. I'm trying to keep up with the time line, and from what I can gather, Lily travels back and forth through time in an effort to defeat Voldie? Is that correct? Sorry, if I'm a little confused, but I absolutely love this story, so you'd better continue...hear me young lady? LOL! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reading Pandora, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  It has been entirely too long, hasn't it?  Hopefully I'll be much quicker with the next installment.  I'm very excited about when Harry finds out Sev is his father too; I think you'll like how he figures it out.  I'm pretty sure that will happen in Part Three, so stay tuned for more!

    You're right, Lily does travel through time trying to fix certain events and prevent catastrophes from happening in the war.  I'm pretty sure that PoA talks about how a time turner can make people crazy if they know about you traveling in time, which is why Lily strives to be so secretive; she doesn't want Sev to go mental (though I think he is anyway, since she's gone so frequently).

    I know this is a bit confusing, but I also think it's the best plot line I've ever come up with.  I'm glad your still enjoying it!

    -P.G. 


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