Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 3 06 Jun 2009 11:03 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Poor Harry. I'm looking forward to signs of awakening if only for the sake of Snape and his friends. I'm really beginning to feel sorry for all of them.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, I can hardly wait to write the awakening scene too and to bringing some happiness to all of them.
Title: Chapter 3 29 Mar 2009 2:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry, I seemed to have missed this chapter Kristeh. It is truly heartbreaking that Harry is like a vegetable.

    You are such an amazing writer, and you convey such powerful emotions.

    I really hope that Harry comes out of this depression soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  You are so kind; it means a lot!
Title: Chapter 3 17 Feb 2009 6:51 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is SO sad. thank you for sharing with us and I hope you will continue to do so.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, it is pretty sad right now, isn't it?  But I do plan for it to end well.  I'm working on ch. 41 of Slave Child now, but after that, I'll probably return to this one.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 3 08 Feb 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Please take this as a compliment--that was heat-breaking. Amazing but "just rip my heart out-why don't you?"

    In SC you do so much from Harry's POV, but this is almost purely Sev (at least at this point) and I'm impressed. It is very well done.

    I'm looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, SC is much more Harry's POV, though there probably will be some more scenes from Severus, but in this story right now, I think Severus' POV is better for moving things along.  I'm glad you like it! 
Title: Chapter 3 08 Feb 2009 6:26 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really nice
    Sad, mind you, but nice. Please continue!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It will stay sad for a while, I'm afraid, but perhaps it will eventually get better.
Title: Chapter 3 08 Feb 2009 4:27 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so sad and heartbreaking but I love your Severus in this story. I want to hug him and Harry both!

    Most excellently done!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Would it sound awful if I said that I love Severus here, too, lol!  I do imagine him being his usual harsh self way back in the beginning when they found out about the slavery spell...I have not decided if I'm going to attempt to show any of that through memories or flashbacks...but I do see Severus as someone who could be kind and devoted if he let himself care for someone again, and now he cares for Harry a great deal.
Title: Chapter 3 08 Feb 2009 1:07 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How do you cry on paper? So sad and poignant...pretty realistic, I think. I think there's hope. I'm so glad there was more:)

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  Yes, there is still a fair bit more, though I don't think it will be anywhere near as long as "Slave Child" or "HP and the Potions Professor". 
Title: Chapter 3 08 Feb 2009 12:07 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey Kristeh! What an interesting take on what could have happened. I'm enjoying this. I hope you'll be able to find the time to continue it. And I hope Harry will be able to start recovering soon. It is all so very sad.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you're enjoying it and I will continue, but it might be at a snail's pace, lol.  Harry will eventually recover, but not just yet, I'm afraid.
Title: Chapter 3 07 Feb 2009 1:04 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Severus, it must be awful for him wanting to give Harry the life he deserves and not having him respond : (
    I love that they are off home though, its probably the best place for my 2 favourite guys! : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Oh, I'm glad you noticed that it is a very sad and difficult situation for Severus, too.  He loves Harry and is desperate to help him, but he doesn't know how to reach him. 
Title: Chapter 3 07 Feb 2009 11:02 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing! Love the idea for the story! I was almost in tears already. I hope that you will update soon. Fantastic job!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy that you like it. 

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