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Reviews For A Pair of Phoenixes
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I can hardly wait to write the awakening scene too and to bringing some happiness to all of them.
You are such an amazing writer, and you convey such powerful emotions. I really hope that Harry comes out of this depression soon. Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora! You are so kind; it means a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, it is pretty sad right now, isn't it? But I do plan for it to end well. I'm working on ch. 41 of Slave Child now, but after that, I'll probably return to this one. Thanks again!
In SC you do so much from Harry's POV, but this is almost purely Sev (at least at this point) and I'm impressed. It is very well done. I'm looking forward to your next update. V. Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, SC is much more Harry's POV, though there probably will be some more scenes from Severus, but in this story right now, I think Severus' POV is better for moving things along. I'm glad you like it!
Sad, mind you, but nice. Please continue!! Author's Response: Thank you! It will stay sad for a while, I'm afraid, but perhaps it will eventually get better.
Most excellently done! Dancingkatz Author's Response: Thank you! Would it sound awful if I said that I love Severus here, too, lol! I do imagine him being his usual harsh self way back in the beginning when they found out about the slavery spell...I have not decided if I'm going to attempt to show any of that through memories or flashbacks...but I do see Severus as someone who could be kind and devoted if he let himself care for someone again, and now he cares for Harry a great deal.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Yes, there is still a fair bit more, though I don't think it will be anywhere near as long as "Slave Child" or "HP and the Potions Professor".
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying it and I will continue, but it might be at a snail's pace, lol. Harry will eventually recover, but not just yet, I'm afraid.
I love that they are off home though, its probably the best place for my 2 favourite guys! : ) Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, I'm glad you noticed that it is a very sad and difficult situation for Severus, too. He loves Harry and is desperate to help him, but he doesn't know how to reach him.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy that you like it. |
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