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Title: Chapter 6 27 Jun 2009 3:40 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    NO, NO, NONONONONONONONO! Snape do not be an idiot. You don't even know if it will bring Harry out of his state and then who would really care for him? He'll be put in an institution. Left alone and forgoten. He will never forgive himself if you do succeed and kill yourself to release him. Someone else dieing for him.

    This is a BAD IDEA. YOu are feeling depressed and discouraged. Don't be a Griffindor and jump into something without considereing ALL the possibilities.

    DO NOT DO IT!

    Great Chapter!
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  And yes...it was a totally bad idea, but Severus did not think the whole thing through.  As I said in another review, I know that it is not like him not to be very thorough and to think through all the consequences, but at this point he is really affected by Harry's condition and he is desperate.  He really loves Harry.    
Title: Chapter 6 24 Jun 2009 11:35 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww what a sad chapter :( is poor Severus actually considering killing himself? would that free Harry? I trust you not to kill him off...but the thought is still a sad one, cant wait to read more :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus is thinking of killing himself and yes, if he died, it would free Harry.  At least, it would free Harry from the slavery spell, but I think Harry would be haunted and would never get over it if Severus died for him.  That's something that Severus has not really considered yet.  He is so desperate to help Harry that he has not thought this idea all the way through, which is most unlike him, but is a sign of how much he loves Harry and how much he's been affected by Harry's condition too. 
Title: Chapter 6 24 Jun 2009 9:47 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I hope to see more soon please!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I will try to update quickly.
Title: Chapter 6 24 Jun 2009 6:36 am
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was wonderful!! I hope Severus doesn't do anything stupid. This update was a wonderful b-day gift!

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  And happy birthday!
Title: Chapter 6 24 Jun 2009 4:39 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Aghhhh, don't do it, Severus. Harry has to wake up another way.

    Rats - update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I will update soon.  I'm very excited about the next chapter, though a little nervous, too, because it's the heart and soul of the story. 
Title: Chapter 6 24 Jun 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Kristeh, you never disappoint. So beautifully written, and I'm so envious at how well you write feelings, small details--hell, everything! I wish I could write like you do.

    Oh, I'm getting worried at Severus' comment about sacrificing himself. I'm really hoping that there is at least some progress soon. I want to see Severus and Harry become a family, and Harry be happy. I really hope that Severus can finally make a breakthrough with this potion.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much, Pandora!  But you don't have any cause to be envious...you are a fantastic writer!  And btw, I just discovered your latest chapter and left a review for it...fabulous job as always!

    Yes, there will be definite progress in the next chapter...I said it would take something drastic to reach Harry, didn't I?  And it's about to happen...I only hope I can do it justice.  It's hard with those scenes you've had built up in your own mind for so long, you know.  Thanks again! 

      


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