Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 31 Jan 2009 9:27 pm
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG this is great! Please continue! I know Slave Child is your priority, which I understand because I love that too, but please don't neglect this! I need to see Harry come out of this!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I may try to work on this one tonight if I have time.  Harry will come of out of it eventually, but not for a while yet.  Thanks again.  I'm really happy you like it! 
Title: Chapter 2 21 Jan 2009 4:52 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad to be able to review. Problems with net and computer at home, so I go on my cell, and on the computer at work.

    I loved it of course, and Sev's a doll. I really hope that Harry is going to be ok!

    Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad to see you around again, too!  Computer problems are the pits, aren't they?  I can live without television, but not without my computer. 
Title: Chapter 2 21 Jan 2009 11:21 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh poor Harry, he's lucky that he has such good people surrounding him. Im glad that Severus wants to take him home he must know how much Harry dislikes the hospital wing bless him : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It is the love and care of his friends, especially Severus, that will bring Harry out of his depression in the end, and is the key to ultimately freeing him, so yeah, he is very lucky to have Severus, Ron, and Hermione with him.  And of course Harry hates the hospital wing, lol!  Doesn't everyone?
Title: Chapter 1 06 Jan 2009 8:12 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh man I absolutly love angsty/suicidal/self-harming Harry! it shows how vulnerable he is and lets us see how he would feel when something like this happens, and of course what makes it even better is when he has a lovely Severus there to help him through the rough patches with some good advice and lots of hugs, yay smush scenes! : )

    I also love slave fics where Harry is Snapes slave (as you may have guessed from my reviews for Slave Child!!) I will look forward to this as well as SC being updated : )

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I actually don't like for Harry to be so hurt...despite what it may seem, lol, but I do think he would be more affected by all the hardships he's suffered.  No one can really be that resilient, and I like to write about the healing process, so that's why so many of my stories are angsty and hurt/comfort.

    I really don't want to be 'slave-fic' writer, but this was inspired by a few other stories I've read, plus wondering about some alternative scenes from SC.  I'm working on the next SC chapter now and I may try to work on this one again after the SC chapter is finished.  Thanks again!  I'm happy you like it.  

     

Title: Chapter 1 04 Jan 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, I Love SC. I was a bit concerned that you had started another new story and not updated there. But, this is (as usual) amazinly well written and demonstrates wonderful emotion (and of course angst). I'm looking forward to "what's next" for our favorite duo. And how this will differ from SC.

    More soon, please, of both stories!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  No need to worry about SC...it's my top priority (writing priority, that is)!  I've done a lot of writing the past few weeks, or at least I feel that I have, and now that "Christmas at Spinner's End" is complete, I'm taking a week's holiday from writing.  But I am planning to work on a new chapter for SC later this week.  As for "Pair of Phoenixes", I've wondered if I should have even posted it, as I know I'll only be able to work on it in bits here and there, but nothing ventured, nothing gained, right?  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 1 30 Dec 2008 5:48 am
Reviewer: JMC (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is interesting. Something is askew with the Wizarding World and their magic if Harry had to become a slave to free them. How can they call themselves free under those conditions.
    I hope Severus and Harry find some happiness and I hope you are able to work on this and still finish SC and Potions Professor. Now you have a lot to keep track of.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, yeah, but I think things were askew in the Wizarding World in canon, too, since they all depended on Harry to save them there and the house elves are slaves.  For the record, I strongly disapprove of slavery, and I am planning for Harry to eventually be free again in both SC and in this one.  I do have a lot to keep track of, lol, but I will get it all done eventually, God willing!  
Title: Chapter 1 29 Dec 2008 10:03 pm
Reviewer: dancegirl01mom (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked the first chapter. Looking forward to more.

    Question - will you work on this one and Slave child as well? I know you put Potions Professor on hold to finish Slave CHild and I was hoping for a finished Slave Child so you could get back to Potions Professor?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  "Slave Child" is top priority...I can't wait to get back to it, actually, lol!  I'm trying to finish "Christmas at Spinner's End" tonight and then a SC chapter will be next.  I'll just have to work on this one in little bits here and there, I think.  
Title: Chapter 1 29 Dec 2008 9:49 pm
Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story and concept. I've always like stories where Harry was depressed/suicidal.. as bad as it sounds lol. I just always wondered how he was able to persevere in the stories and not succumb to those thoughts/actions. Anyways can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I don't really like for Harry to be so hurt (though it may seem so), but it does seem like he's extremely resilient in canon, doesn't it?
Title: Chapter 1 29 Dec 2008 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Harry!

    Can you imagine trying to cut off his mark? Yikes, how painful!

    Nice beginning Kristeh. I'm looking forward to reading more. I want to see more of Sev taking care of Harry. I love when Severus is so caring.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Pandora!  Yes, there will be more of Severus the caretaker here.

    >>>I love when Severus is so caring.

    So does that mean he'll end up being a marshmellow in your story, too, lol? 


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