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Reviews For Better Off Forgotten
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope to go back and re-write it one day, I had received some very rude feedback on another website for this story and it discoraged me. Thank you for taking time to review! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ I really, really need to edit this and start re-posting, :(
Snape's comment of can't we just sit here and watch it made me giggle. Actually that happened once when my brother got into a fight with a high school bully, who was trying hurt his best friend. His chemistry teacher, who he said was sarcastic like Severus, watched him pound the creep for six minutes before stopping it because he knew just how much that bully deserved it. Then he said to my brother, "Sorry to break up the morning entertainment, but I'm afraid I have to follow school rules." he then told my brother, "They'll suspend you for three days but I have to tell you that watching you kick that kid's ass made my morning. I've wanted to do that ever since that one walked into this school." I like how Snape punished Malfoy too. FYI-I've updated Broken Wings if you want to read more about Harry!hawk and Severus. Author's Response: LOL, ^_^ That's funny, thanks for sharing and I'm SO very sorry about responding so late! I'm glad you liked it--oh, and congrats on winning featured story status! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really sorry for responding so late, BoF is on a bit of a hold I'm afraid, but I'll be back on track with it soon enough!
Well done, and I hope that Snape's potion helps find Harry! Author's Response: Ah, it just feels like it needs help to me. I'm going to edit it and re-post--when I can find time! I'm very sorry for responding so late, sorry Pandora! Thank you reviewing! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^_^
I for one cheered Ron on for punching Malfoy! Hermione's quote was funny too; “It would have been better for you to keep your mouth shut and appear stupid, than to open it up and remove all doubt!” I've heard that before and have to agree. Though resorting to violence wasn’t the smartest move, Draco deserved the whupping he got. What he said was truly jerk-like and an insult to poor Harry's character *sniffs snootily* lol ;D BTW, I loved the way Snape seemed so reluctant to intervene and just let the fight continue! And Making Draco agree with his punishment too, so Slytherin! Can't wait to read more as always :) Author's Response: LOL! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it Beth! Sorry for responding so late, I really hate that I did not do it sooner, :( |
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