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Reviews For Lily's Charm: The Man Who Lived
Author's Response: Thanks! What a great compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it! -P.G.
So touching, and as sad as I am that Sirius is gone, I'm glad that it wasn't Severus that was killed. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really happy that Sev pulled through too--imagine how bad things would be if he didn't! Yikes! Anyways, thanks for reading! -P.G.
Lesley Author's Response: I reread as well. I think you're right, only Tonks retreated, though Remus really isn't mentioned and I have a hard time believing he just sat through all that. I don't know, when I wrote this, I assumed he had left. I don't think we know what the portkey is yet. We do know that Bella touched Harry when Sirius brought him out to the plot and that if Bella isn't lying, a word said in the potions shop sent Harry away. He never activated the portkey--someone else did, though we don't really know how or if it was on purpose or not. I'm sure OE will provide us with some lovely answers in the next chapter. -P.G.
I do have one question though. Where was Remus throughout all of this battle? Wasn't he there when Sirius was killed? Just a thought. Lesley Author's Response: Thanks Lesley; I'm glad you enjoyed it. It would have been interesting if it was someone else polyjuiced to be Sev--an auror perhaps? That would have been great if I had chosen to really kill Sev here. The thing about Remus not being here is actually easily answered. I picked up kind of late in OE's battle scene, but before Sirius jumps in front of Sev, Bellatrix was actually threatening to say say the portkey password again and send Harry somewhere else because Sev had brought Tonks and Remus along. So, to prevent Harry from being portkeyed to Merlin only knows where, both Tonks and Remus vacated the area (though I'm not quite sure why she didn't make Sirius leave too--I might ask OE about that; maybe it'll be in the next chapter, or I've just missed the explanation...). Anyways, thanks for reading! -P.G.
Author's Response: Thanks! -P.G.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I love Sev with a curse scar too--I'm glad your fic gave me such an interesting idea. Go ahead and link away! Thanks for letting me write this little ditty! I had a lot of fun with it! -P.G.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed my fic. He did get a scar--a curse scar, just like Harry's. -P.G. |
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