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Title: Of Confrontations and Flames 11 Mar 2009 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm relieved that Severus is feeling some guilt now. It seemed that he was only afraid of Dumbledore's reaction, rather than feeling responsible for Harry's condition.

    I enjoy your writing style. There are only a couple of other writers who describe small details so well, that you can imagine yourself there, and that is a rare gift.

    Author's Response:

    Thankyou for the lovely review =) it makes me happy to hear that, I do love my details! Thankgoodness Sev is feeling 'something' towards this whole ideal.   More is to come soon!

    ~Clovergirl22 

Title: Of Confrontations and Flames 26 Feb 2009 3:42 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, I loved the way Sev and Sirius went at each other. And Dumbledore, he's too sneaky for a Gryffindor, why didn't he get put in Slytherin? Also, I have a question, it was kind of hinted at the end there that Albus got inside Sev's head. But Sev's a master Occulmens, how was that possible?

    Author's Response:

    Hey thankyou for the review! Sev and Sirius are fun to write about...and as for Dumbledore, I always wondered the same actually. cunning, old coot =X As for the ending of the chapter, I like to think that Albus just kind of "always knows" things that he shouldn't be knowing. Figures, he did in fact know Snape first as a boy before he became a man. It makes sense for Dumbledore to sense somethings up. Sometimes a little intuition, bad vibes, and assumptions is all one needs. We will see how this fairs out though. Thankyou for wondering, gives me things to think about too ;)

    ~Clovergirl22 

Title: Of Confrontations and Flames 21 Feb 2009 11:22 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well this certainly showed the Slytherin in Snape. What a liar! How can Dumbledore possibly trust the git? However, I must protest on Harry's behalf the 'troublesome Gryffindor' remark. He has never been one for pranks or fighting and only broke the rules when his friends or Hogwarts was in danger. This attitude was encouraged, not discouraged in any way, by Dumbledore with his awarding of points and giving of invisibility cloaks. Face it, Dumbledore is training Harry obliquely to take up the mantel of savior of the wizarding world. For Dumbledore to now call him on this to Snape no less is blatantly unfair. And to double poor Harry's burden he will now have to suffer Snape's care after being attacked by the git. Just who will ever stand up for Harry while Dumbledore seems to care more for Snape?

    Well now that my rant is done it was a excellent chapter, can't wait for scary Dumbledore.

    Author's Response:

    Thankyou for the review =) And you have a good point. Just who will ever stand up for Harry? This will be addressed in future chapters, no worries. Stay tuned

    ~Clovergirl22 


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