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Reviews For A Jar of Dead Cockroaches
I enjoy your writing style. There are only a couple of other writers who describe small details so well, that you can imagine yourself there, and that is a rare gift. Author's Response: Thankyou for the lovely review =) it makes me happy to hear that, I do love my details! Thankgoodness Sev is feeling 'something' towards this whole ideal. More is to come soon! ~Clovergirl22
Author's Response: Hey thankyou for the review! Sev and Sirius are fun to write about...and as for Dumbledore, I always wondered the same actually. cunning, old coot =X As for the ending of the chapter, I like to think that Albus just kind of "always knows" things that he shouldn't be knowing. Figures, he did in fact know Snape first as a boy before he became a man. It makes sense for Dumbledore to sense somethings up. Sometimes a little intuition, bad vibes, and assumptions is all one needs. We will see how this fairs out though. Thankyou for wondering, gives me things to think about too ;) ~Clovergirl22
Well now that my rant is done it was a excellent chapter, can't wait for scary Dumbledore. Author's Response: Thankyou for the review =) And you have a good point. Just who will ever stand up for Harry? This will be addressed in future chapters, no worries. Stay tuned ~Clovergirl22 |
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