Potions and Snitches
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Title: Of Two and Two 13 Apr 2009 2:09 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Le. gasp.
    This is intense.[in a good way, of course]

    Author's Response: thanks! =D more to come soon!
Title: Of Two and Two 03 Apr 2009 4:30 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!

    Severus did an adamant job of protesting, but in the end Dumbledore's decision is final. I'm glad that you made him have real reasons for wanting Harry to recover with Severus, rather then just having the Headmaster dump the kid on him 'because'.

    I really feel for the Potions Professor though. At first his protesting was funny, but towards the end I felt sympathy. Poor guy, it was heartbreaking to hear him worry over ‘failing Lily again’. I wish the guy luck in his task, it sure will be a tiresome and troubling experience. Both for him, and Harry.

    As for Sirius... No one would blame the guy if he just ran off screaming into the night after what he witnessed xP. There's only so much crazy-ness a guy can take in one day after all…

    Author's Response:

    Haha! I know, Sirius is already unstable as it is, at the moment he probably perfers to go back to Akzabam. =P Yes, stories of Dumbledore just throwing Harry at Severus can be a bit unrealistic, but since Albus is gone, who else is going to care for Harry?

    *sigh* Severus is in for a hell of a ride. His protesting was meant to get giggles but there are two sides of that man that just make you go "awww" I give him luck 2, he's going to need it. Thankyou for commenting and reading, more to come soon!

    ~CLovergirl22 

Title: Of Two and Two 27 Mar 2009 11:21 am
Reviewer: Becca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story! What a mess Severus has gotten himself into. I liked Snape's realization/relation to Harry's feelings of guilt. Though Snape's character has far more to feel guilty about. I noticed in the warnings you are considering putting corporeal punishment into this story - I really hope it doesn't go down that road as I personally find CP utterly inappropriate for a teenager (for multiple reasons.) Anyway, you a very good, detailed writer - I especially like your psychological insights into Snape's gradual shift in thinking. Thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response:

    Thankyou for the review =) It's important that Snape slowly changes throughout this, he can be hard to write at times. As for CP in the story, I really don't see it myself at the moment, nor suicide theme or anything. I'lll take it off when I know for sure but I do agree with you. Thankyou again! More to come soon

    ~Clovergirl22 

Title: Of Two and Two 25 Mar 2009 7:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, there will be many questions to answer when, and if Harry ever regains his memory! And Severus had better be prepared to answer them! LOL!

    Good luck Sevvie! I'm glad to see that Severus is questioning his judgement concerning Harry; it will lead the way hopefully, to them reaching an understanding.

    Still enjoying your story, and looking forward to your next update!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review =) Severus is going to need all the luck he can get! And as for the understanding between the two goes, well where there is a will there is a way (let's just get to the "will" part first lol)

    ~Clovergirl22 

     

Title: Of Two and Two 25 Mar 2009 8:02 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the way Snape protected harry instinctively from everyone, even if he didn't know quite why he did it.

    Dumbledore knows, of course, that Harry only trusts Snape right now, so of course he's the only logical choice to look after him. And maybe that will help Snape heal from his guilt in failing Lily and also hurting Harry.

    Oh, and in order to add the warnings and such you need to click on the edit button on the story profile and use the Control button when you come to something you'd like to add, and then left click the mouse and it should highlight it blue. Make sure you hold down the CTRL button and then left click the mouse to highlight. It's a little tricky, but you'll get the hang of it eventually.

    Author's Response:

    Yup, Dumbledore knows Harry only trust Snape at moment, is has to be him.

    AS for Sev, he is slowly coming to feel bad for what he did to Harry, even though he doesn't really know it yet.

     Thankyou about the warning tid-bit. I'll try it out as soon as I get home from school today. Thanks! 

    ~Clovergirl22 


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