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Title: Of Cracking Stones and Changes Part2 17 Jun 2009 4:44 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I actually feel bad for Severus. He is one really messed up guy. I hope that Harry can forgive him for what he's done, and they can finally open up to each other. I wonder if Snape will ever soften up.

    Now, Harry is starting to remember. Not good, but then again, it is the only way that Snape can forgive himself, and Harry too, and they can move on from here.

    I'm sorry I missed a couple of chapters somehow. Well done.

    Author's Response: it's ok. Thankyou for reading and reviewing! I do agree, I feel rather bad for Severus. more to come soon!
Title: Of Cracking Stones and Changes Part2 03 May 2009 4:29 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, this chapter was so good, so intense! I could really feel the tension and anxiety. I’m surprised Harry momentarily regained himself, and hope that this is a good sign. Though, imagining how upset Harry was, trying to get his message through to Poppy, was sad. And poor Sev, he seems completely undone.

    Speaking of which... last chapter was hilarious! I loved how crazed the potions professor seemed. Here Ron and Hermione thought Snape was being harsh with them, but when he reprimanded Draco… I was so shocked! I couldn’t help but be pleased though, Draco’s words were so cruel. He really pushed Severus over the edge too, when he was already internally tortured. *nervous laugh*

    Author's Response:

    thanks Beth! Loving the emotions here! Hermione and Ron are going to pop up again in a later chapter, It must have been very odd for them to see Snape punishing Draco when everyone knows that he's the class favorite! More to come, hopefully soon.

     

Title: Of Cracking Stones and Changes Part2 02 May 2009 5:43 pm
Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus is a piece of work, isn't he. Such a wounded man underneath the heavy layer of snark, anger, menace, you name it. You do a good job keeping him in character. I'm curious to see how he handles Harry in the next chapter. I hope he takes a shower before he goes up there; it's apparent he needs one!

    Author's Response:

    thanks! yea he is...poor guy...haha, stinky severus =P

     


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