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Reviews For A Jar of Dead Cockroaches
Have fun x Author's Response: thankyou! writting about emotions are my forte! more to come =)
But you should watch your punctuation. > .", < Commas do not come after " and in many cases you should use ," instead of ." Example: "Yes, sir," said Harry. Author's Response: thanks=) I will fix it the next time I do an edit!
Author's Response: Yeah. This week I did a whole editing on all the chapters. The last chapter is actually spilt into two parts when orginally it was one. But thankyou~ lol a NEW chapter will be up asap!! =D
I love Snape telling him that he was taking care of him for his mother. Too sweet. I love where this story is going, but I am nervous about when Harry remembers the jar incident. Author's Response: Yes I'm nervous for that too, but of course, SNape and Harry have a bit of bonding to do before then!! >=D (evil grin)
Author's Response: Yeah I was a bit worried about posting that, i actually cut a lot out of it 0..0 but yes, as soon as Snape has the oppertunity to go to Dumbledore with the news the Dursley's are going to get a major butt kicking! Justice! justice!! Thanks for the review
Author's Response: Your welcome and thankyou I'll update soon!
Author's Response: Hahah! I love my sugar too =P yup, SNape<3sLily
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll get right to it!
BTW: "Nether the less, I promised to protect you." That should be "NEVER the less..." Is Harry gonna keep his memories now? Author's Response: Opps! thanks I'll fix that asap. As for the memories, it was just a temporary return...for now. |
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