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Reviews For A Jar of Dead Cockroaches
Author's Response: hahahah, as Ron puts it, "Have you just been oblivated Hermione?" well perhaps all Hermione is trying to do at the moment is to prevent Ron from blowing up further. You can sense she's a little bit in denial herself though as at the end here, she does hint that she believes the "possiblitly" that Snape is involved with Harry's dissapearence. Of course she's going to investigate further before she jumps to any conclusions. Such a Ravenclaw at heart that girl! Hope that clears some up =) thankyou for the review!
Good, because in this way I had an excuse to re-read the whole fic! Author's Response: hahaha, well then, that really worked out for you then! thankyou for the review by the way! more to come soon~
Great chappie. I can't wait for more. I'm dying to know what plan Hermione has up her sleeve. Author's Response: thankyou! Yup, Hermione is one smart cookie! more to come soon!
Have fun x Author's Response: thankyou! writting about emotions are my forte! more to come =)
But you should watch your punctuation. > .", < Commas do not come after " and in many cases you should use ," instead of ." Example: "Yes, sir," said Harry. Author's Response: thanks=) I will fix it the next time I do an edit!
Author's Response: Yeah. This week I did a whole editing on all the chapters. The last chapter is actually spilt into two parts when orginally it was one. But thankyou~ lol a NEW chapter will be up asap!! =D
I love Snape telling him that he was taking care of him for his mother. Too sweet. I love where this story is going, but I am nervous about when Harry remembers the jar incident. Author's Response: Yes I'm nervous for that too, but of course, SNape and Harry have a bit of bonding to do before then!! >=D (evil grin)
What an epiphany that must be to the snarky Potions Master! Glad you've updated. Interesting story and different. Author's Response: Yup It's the best moment in all Harry/ Snape fanfics...the "wow I'm such a jackass" moment hahahaha thanks for the reviews!
Author's Response: Yeah I was a bit worried about posting that, i actually cut a lot out of it 0..0 but yes, as soon as Snape has the oppertunity to go to Dumbledore with the news the Dursley's are going to get a major butt kicking! Justice! justice!! Thanks for the review
Author's Response: Your welcome and thankyou I'll update soon! |
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