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Reviews For A Jar of Dead Cockroaches
Sirius must be wondering ‘what the bloody hell is going on?!’ lol After all, not only is his godson apparently terrified of him, but he’s clinging onto 'the enemy' as well. Sirius will definitely be wanting some answers! We're all waiting for Dumbledore to speak up... I REALLY want to read more, so please, please post again as soon as you can! :) Author's Response: Thanks! more Dumbledore to come...and Sirius for the latter! =X Shock doesn't even describe whats going to come up next. I love Harry here, cute but sad.. Thanks for reviewing, will post again soon! ~Clovergirl22
As for Sirius, Lord the man's lucky Harry didn't pass out. really, the man has to learn some self-control, he used to be an Auror, for heaven's sake! Author's Response: Yup, poor Harry =( but he is SO adorable when he's...um...loopy..*hugs him!* It's important for us to know that he can see the other side of Snape that he was kind of 'blinded' from seeing before, i'm glad you've picked that up. Agreed, Sirius should gain self control, but you know how quick tempered the man is; Merlin help him when he learns what happened to his godchild! More to come thanks for the review =) ~Clovergirl22
Author's Response: Hey thankyou for the review! Sev and Sirius are fun to write about...and as for Dumbledore, I always wondered the same actually. cunning, old coot =X As for the ending of the chapter, I like to think that Albus just kind of "always knows" things that he shouldn't be knowing. Figures, he did in fact know Snape first as a boy before he became a man. It makes sense for Dumbledore to sense somethings up. Sometimes a little intuition, bad vibes, and assumptions is all one needs. We will see how this fairs out though. Thankyou for wondering, gives me things to think about too ;) ~Clovergirl22
Author's Response: *blushes* well...hate is a very stronge word, my friend. But A little torture here or there for Sirius can't hurt, can it? *evil smirk* Don't worry, I really don't hate the guy. He's not a flat character, he's fun, he's energetic, I actually do respect him when he doesn't act like a jerk. Keep reading to see how the plot developes! Shall be interestingggg ~Clovergirl22
Author's Response: hmm...THAT may just come up in a future chapter. We'll see. Poppy was probably more focused on Harry's head issues than his body at the moment. Thankyou for reviewing! more to come next chapter! ~Clovergirl22
SG Author's Response: thanks! More to come soon!
Author's Response: No. he's not pleased at all. =X Thankyou for reviewing! ~Clovergirl22
Well now that my rant is done it was a excellent chapter, can't wait for scary Dumbledore. Author's Response: Thankyou for the review =) And you have a good point. Just who will ever stand up for Harry? This will be addressed in future chapters, no worries. Stay tuned ~Clovergirl22
I know the jar hit him in the head, and that's enough to knock him out and maybe cut him, but did he land on the broken glass on the floor too? Because I don't know if Snape could throw the jar that hard to warrent it shattering that way and not killing poor Harry. Just a thought. Author's Response: And a good one. Well, this is a fictional story, anything can happen =) Thankyou for reading and reviewing, Severus coming to realize that it wasn't just James's son is very important to how this story developes (as in the book thats all he ever saw Harry as being with the exception of the ending of DH) more to come soon! ~Clovergirl22
Another point I have yet to see in this type of fic is that if Snape vowed to Protect Harry and then violated that oath, shouldn't their be some consequences to Snape's magic? Here he has potential caused devastating injury, clearly a violation of a protection oath, magic should be either taking away his magic or causing him some pain in return. At least until he learns a lesson and Harry has returned to health. Perhaps he has to find a ritual to transfer some of his valued and vaulted brains to Harry. Author's Response: Hmmm interesting point there about common room factor and about how Severus "vowed to protect Potter."Its not as literally as it sounds but more of something that he did on using freewill like "sworn to himself" but you'll have to read and find out more! =) Anyway, let you be assured that there is going to be consquences to the man's misdeeds non the less....Thankyou for reading and reviewing =) ~Clovergirl22 |
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