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Title: World War I 17 Jun 2022 1:36 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an absolutely brilliant chapter, and you’re an amazing writer. I love the “war” Harry waged. The chapter end was so beautifully done - gripping, moving, and perfectly in character for the way you’ve written Harry and Severus.
Title: World War I 21 Feb 2022 3:09 am
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    MILD. Like, SUPER mild.

    “I just figured you'd belt me a couple times, sir.” Said Harry, shrugging nonchalantly.

    OmGoodness Harry, getting belted is not mild in any sense of the word.
Title: World War I 13 Aug 2014 8:55 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the hard method
Title: World War I 07 Feb 2011 11:50 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so good!!!
Title: World War I 09 Jan 2011 1:18 pm
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugg, I keep trying to tell myself 'one more chapter and then I'll go to sleep' and then you throw something like this at me!

    Really enjoying this story - clearly it's got some incredible potential with just the premise. And, while I'm not usually a fan of duel perspective chapters in the format you're using, it's incredibly well written - giving a unique view from both Harry and Snape fairly evenly.

    And now I return to not sleeping...
Title: World War I 11 Aug 2010 4:48 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked the whole evasion - kid knows how to run, though, he'd certainly need to know how. *frown* Loved Harry's response to Snape's howler: “He cheated." ^^

    Really great chapter! Well written, too. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Title: World War I 02 Aug 2010 6:48 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it. The only thing I would change is having two versions of the same events. Really we only needed to see the one version of the hospital wing instead of having two separated pieces of Harry and Snape's perspectives. You can blend them together into once scene.

    I like your story a lot!
Title: World War I 12 Dec 2009 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww... poor Harry. He almost seemed like a poor, small, trapped animal. It was horrible. Snape knew just how to get to him.

    Good job!

    Author's Response: Yeah, poor Harry. Thanks for reviewing!! Glad you liked!!
Title: World War I 06 Oct 2009 2:54 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    "This, in turn, lead to an image of Snape's face on Vernon's meaty body and Harry nearly choked on his mixed hilarity and disgust. Okay BAD thought. Bad, bad thought."

    PHOTOSHOP, HARRY, PHOTOSHOP.
    -anyhow-.

    I'm noting a distinct lack of an update. Yes, yes I am.

    Author's Response: I sorry!! I'm working on it, but for some reason it's been going quite slow. It is NOT abandoned in any way, shape, or form, and I in fact have big plans for the next couple of chapters, but between lots of work and writer's block, I'm not quite sure how soon I can get the chapter out. (It's about 1/2 done) Thanks for the support and the review!! Rhiannan
Title: World War I 06 Oct 2009 2:54 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    "This, in turn, lead to an image of Snape's face on Vernon's meaty body and Harry nearly choked on his mixed hilarity and disgust. Okay BAD thought. Bad, bad thought."

    PHOTOSHOP, HARRY, PHOTOSHOP.
    -anyhow-.

    I'm noting a distinct lack of an update. Yes, yes I am.

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