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Reviews For Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat
However, I have rated it 6 out of 10 because I feel there could be improvement in the writing, for example more realistic diaglogue (such as no ”duh” and using words uncommon to British people - nobody says "mind me" here). Additionally, I think writing style should convey tone rather than over reliance on capitalisation. Characterisation could also be stronger.
I am greatly enjoying this fic and am delighted to find a nice long fic that promises to be such an entertaining read. BTW Harry's previous address was 4 Privit Drive, NOT 4 Private Drive. Privit is not a miss-spelling of Private, it is a genus of shrubs, one variety of which is often used as a hedge. Also, here: Surely it can't just be the principal of the thing – I know you've obeyed professors in the past.” Principal should be principle, they are not the same thing. Author's Response: Yey, glad you like! And thanks for the corrections! I'm a dumb butt. Will fix. Rhiannan
Definitely liked the conversation and the way Albus reacted. I can't wait to find out what Harry's done now - and what will happen next! Great writing, please keep goign! Author's Response: Oops I forgot to respond to this one. I'm glad you like cliffies - a lot of people don't. :-)
Author's Response: Harry's needs come first, but I'm sure that will come...
Author's Response: Hey, brat. This is far too public a forum for you to call me that. Brat. Don't worry about the misspelling - I fixed it. Well done on the beta for the last one, though we didn't get to chat about it a lot. I'd appreciate it if you read over (quickly) those parts again, since I've changed quite a bit, before reading the rest. When are you getting your fanfic up here, anyway?
Ahhhhhhhh! eeeeeeeeek! ahem. You write well. Please update soon. Author's Response: LOL. Thanks. Update will be up relatively soon - I'm like 2/3 soon and have an unexpected amount of free time right now. Thanks again, Rhiannan:-)
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I figured both Albus and Severus benefited from that. Albus needed a reality check, and Severus is just too self deprecating for his own good. :-)
Author's Response: I do actually use a spell checker - which is part of the problem. I thought floo was spelled that way, my spell-checker actually disagreed. I think "floo" as in "floo powder" is either a British term that my American spell checker doesn't like, or a JKR make-up. I'll fix it. Thanks! And no worries, I'm in no danger of losing my muse. :-)
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