Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 3:16 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh im glad you put the chat between these two in, I love to see them showing their bond : )

    Author's Response: Thanks! Me, too. I figure Albus is the best role-model Severus has for how to treat Harry. (Though of course Severus' own personality will get in the way of some of that!)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 8:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What an ending cliff hanger! I hope that Harry is okay!!

    Poor Harry. Snape is right in a lot of ways. I wonder what it will take for Harry to trust him.

    Great story so far! Thank you for the updates! :)

    Author's Response: AH! Okay I really have to clarify this. It's the same infirmary blow-up as before. Thanks for the review!
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 5:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Harry again?

    I loved that conversation. Dumbledore needed to hear the reality, and Snape needs to realise that he can still be what Harry needs.

    Nice job. I' m looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Ooh, perhaps I should've made that clear. This is the first time, when Severus leaves to talk to the Headmaster while Poppy deals with Harry and he ends up freaking out. rnrnGlad you liked the convo. :-)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 4:49 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    First, very well named chapter.

    I'm glad that you decided to add this conversation to the storyline. I liked Snape's combination of relief (that Albus didn't know) and fear (that Albus didn't know).

    Author's Response: Thanks! I try to keep chapter titles vaguely interesting. :-)
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 4:48 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the bonus chapter! That was an interesting discussion between Severu and DD. I'm glad we got to see them discussing Harry's situation. Thank you for sharing it with us.

    Author's Response: No problem!! I'm having lots of fun with this story, too. When you write, it's like you get to dictate your own ideal fanfic. (Though sometimes it's frustrating 'cause you know what you want to say, and can't make it come out right.
Title: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    flue is actually spelled floo. I like this story. It's interesting and I like your writing style. Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! (and I'll fix the error eventually - I thought it was spelled floo but my spellcheck didn't like it)

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