I love your version of Snape. He’s calm, compassionate, and thoughtful, even as he’s still in character.
I can't stand the taste of normal medicine, so I don't think I'd be able to hold down that stuff Snape gave Harry. I'd have probable thrown up as soon as it touched my tongue. :)
Lololol this fix is adorablee
| Title: World War II - part 2
| 05 Jun 2011 6:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Rose (Anonymous)
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OK, I'm kind of squirming in my seat- uncomfortable- because of all the punishments Snape's laying on. Seems like adding insult to injury. (small problem with authority-figure types) However! I'm loving this story. After work, I bet I'll finish the rest in one sitting.
The image of the teeth growing in the cauldron was both disturbing and humorous, and the... foul-mouth remedy sound vile. In fact, I'm quite certain if it were me, I would be very well acquainted with said concoction. >.-
Well writ! ^^
Pardon for my interruption miss, but I have a question. The start of the chapter marks this as chapter 9. The chapter navigation tells me it's chapter 7. Also the chapter navigation tells me this chapter (World War II - part 2) is chapter 7 while chapter 8 is World War II - part 1. Might I inquire what is the true order lof these chapters, for it has now greatly confused me? Has the navigation mixed up some chapters? Thank you in advance.
-Fujoshi
Author's Response: Woah!! Thanks for the catch!! They got switched somehow! JAS while I fix it.
For some reason I am way behind with this fic. I didn't realise until I got the alert for chapter 11.
This was great. I love the little internal monologues from both protagonists. Snape is being very patient and HArry is slowly, very slowly weakening against the strict kindness being offered (or shoved down his throat, more like). Kindness from an adult is an unknown quantity and Harry is very, very distrustful.
I love how Harry gained himself a house-elf and I love your take on how a house-elf gets a name.
Lesley~
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I think 'shoved down his throat' is pretty accurate...poor Harry is fairly certain he doesn't want any kindness from adults.
it was good......and funny in places. Please let them get along soon????
Author's Response: Thanks! LOL working on it! Next chapter things should pick up a bit.
I liked the chapter, the elf is cute and the whole thing with the horrible tasting stuff in his mouth made me chuckle, as Severus said...he was warned lol :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, Harry was totally asking for it. Not his brightest moment, I must say. Glad you liked it. :-)
Good chapter! It made me think that Snape's made a teensy bit of progress with Harry, not much, but a tiny bit. Ha! Harry accidently 'stealing' a House Elf was so funny! I hope you write more of Kallie - I like the way you write her - most House Elves are just annoying, but Kallie's actually got a personality. Good luck with those exams!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yup, baby steps. Hopefully next chapter things will pick up a bit on that front.
I'm glad you like Kallie. She's looking to be a (relatively) major character in this, just 'cause I like her, too. She reminds me a bit of Mrs. Weasley, if you turned her into a house-elf.
Ewwww Chinese exam. I'll let you know how I do :-)
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