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Reviews For Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat
P.S. love the Monty Python allusion Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :-)
Best parts: Harry accidentally frees a house elf, and then bonds her! Snicker. And the When pigs fly bit, understated and still understood by both of them. A beginning of understanding between them? Author's Response: Woot. Thanks! Yeah, poor, confused Harry. But he's seen another side of Snape, so...maybe things are looking up?
I wonder if Snape will ever get through to defiant Harry. LOL! Well done. Can't wait to read next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I don't know why, but I just didn't feel confident about this chapter.
Th only thing I don't like is how out of character Harry seems from canon, but that is because of his life situation. It's just a little too different for me. Too much thinking - but I guess that just makes him more Slytherin. Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's really ooc. I made no attempt to make him similar to the canon Harry, other than a certain Gryffindorish impulsiveness and dumb bravery. I'm glad you liked the chapter, though. For some reason I had a bought of self-consciousness about it. :-) |
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