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Title: World War II - part 2 30 Apr 2009 7:19 am
Reviewer: ashmeadowphoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked this chapter. It was like a little breath between last chapter and whatever's coming next.

    P.S. love the Monty Python allusion

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :-)
Title: World War II - part 2 30 Apr 2009 6:57 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! I like the humor in this chapter. And your description of the gunk is ...visceral.

    Best parts:
    Harry accidentally frees a house elf, and then bonds her! Snicker.

    And the When pigs fly bit, understated and still understood by both of them. A beginning of understanding between them?

    Author's Response: Woot. Thanks! Yeah, poor, confused Harry. But he's seen another side of Snape, so...maybe things are looking up?
Title: World War II - part 2 30 Apr 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it. Poor Harry having to have that in his mouth. Yuck

    I wonder if Snape will ever get through to defiant Harry. LOL!

    Well done. Can't wait to read next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I don't know why, but I just didn't feel confident about this chapter.
Title: World War II - part 2 30 Apr 2009 6:27 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahah!! Well, it was better than soap!! Poor Harry. I love how Severus is interested in Harry's grades. Great! Thanks for the update!

    Th only thing I don't like is how out of character Harry seems from canon, but that is because of his life situation. It's just a little too different for me. Too much thinking - but I guess that just makes him more Slytherin.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's really ooc. I made no attempt to make him similar to the canon Harry, other than a certain Gryffindorish impulsiveness and dumb bravery. I'm glad you liked the chapter, though. For some reason I had a bought of self-consciousness about it. :-)

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