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Title: Axis and Allies 07 May 2009 1:51 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! Ah! Malfoy! Snape! Harry!
    ARGH! Such angst. Eek! They're being so stupid. (but i love them.) Please update soooooooon. [no self-respecting reader would murder you, that would be stupid. you can't update if you're dead ;). However, Crucio is very good .. incentive.]

    Author's Response: I will...take that under advisement. And write. Fast.
Title: Axis and Allies 07 May 2009 12:55 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter. Tonks and Harry was extremely funny. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I love Tonks. She's awesome. :-)
Title: Axis and Allies 07 May 2009 12:02 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter. Glad Harry had some fun in it before he one more had trouble. My only critique would be that Harry does not know or has been friends with Hermione long enough for her to be a voice in his head! This is a kid that doesn't trust, he wouldn't after a matter of weeks take up some strange girls voice into his mind. Come up with something else, an alter ego, to have conversation with because that is inconceivable. An alter ego would also make more sense as Harry has been so alone in life and can only depend on himself.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Just to clarify - Harry's voice sounds like Hermione, but it sounded like her before he met her. It's just his more 'careful' side, I guess. I should probably make that more clear in the actual story, but I don't honestly know how to go about doing that...lol. Anyway thanks for the review! :-)
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it, especially when Severus realizes that Harry really hates being put in a corner, and also the lessons with Tonks were very cool.

    But a cliffie . . .you're almost as bad as I am with them! I want to know what Malfoy will say or do and what Severus will do as well. Poor Harry, but I think he's in real trouble now!

    Update as fast as you can! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, see...you can't scold me for the cliffie. That would be TOTALLY unfair after the number of your fics I've read, (and loved!) and the number of your cliffies I've dealt with. :-) And yes, poor poor Harry in this one. I actually feel worse for Snape, though. He's really beating himself up about the whole thing. I'm glad you liked Tonks. I was like super-happy when I realized that it would be logical for Snape to bring her in to meet Harry.
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 8:41 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    And you've got me in tears again.

    Good job.

    Loved the scene with Tonks! Loved Snape, the old softie, letting Harry go play for ONE HOUR.

    And standing in the corner really is a trial for Harry.

    And his thoughts during the lines were very good.

    "Hey Voldie! Those robes make you look fat!"

    Of course, maybe more accurate would be: "Hey Voldie: Those robes make you look dead! Oops, my bad. Its not the Robes." Wait... isn't the DL non-coporeal at the moment?

    Any way, most enjoyable.

    Author's Response: lol yes the DL in non-corporeal, but that doesn't mean Harry can't make fun of him. Actually...that leaves room for lots more fun, in my opinion. I HOPE Harry's survival instinct will stretch to not openly insulting the corporeal DL, if I ever get that far, but who knows? He seems a TAD impulsive... Thanks a lot! Did I really make you cry???
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry, I meant to say I'm looking forward to your next update! Not enough coffee and very little sleep.

    I too want to express how much I'm really enjoying this story, and it's one of my favourites as well.

    Author's Response: Thanks! And I understood what you meant. And, hey, it means I get two reviews for the same chapter from you. :-)
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    A quick Obliviate should take care of the Malfoy problem. Baywatch boy! wonderful!

    Author's Response: LOL thanks. I don't know if Sev would consider that or not. It's just a touch unethical.
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 5:33 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely wonderful chapter. I just love this story--one of my favorites. Although, hate the cliffie! And after they were getting along so well and everything. Okay, maybe not 'so well', but better. It was great to see Tonks in this. I was really proud of Severus. I really hope things haven't gone backward too much. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, and sorry! Yeah...I feel bad for Sev in this chapter. He really is trying, but he's just not a 'soft touch,' even when he sorta wants to be. Yeah I was really happy when it became logical for Tonks to get involved - I really like her! I don't know how Harry will react to this latest scare, or Malfoy either. Hopefully it won't go too badly. :-)
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    One of the best chapters so far-- I don't even mind the cliffie after so much fun. Prof. Snape can't afford to always be nice, but it was great to see him show a little mercy. And the time- out was interesting from both POV. Blaise's intelligence, although limited experience, was also great to see. Harry really needs to work on his impulse control-- Draco's annoying, but punching him? It all fits the profile of an abused kid, though.

    I'm very curious about Malfoy now, will he be a protected only child that doesn't recognize Harry's behavior, a death eater in training that has seen how people react after several beatings, or the child of a sadist who knows exactly what Harry is doing?

    Author's Response: Yeah, I honestly think Harry was just bored...he seemed to enjoy the fight, while it lasted. But yeah, impulse control would be helpful. I really have no idea how Draco will react. We never see him have to, in canon. Maybe, faced with somebody whose life has been so much more difficult, he'll grow up a bit? Who knows? Stranger things have happened. (That's certainly not me saying that that WILL happen, though...I still don't know, either!
Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 5:03 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! poor Harry! of all the people who could have been in the common room it was Malfoy, he doesnt seem the type to keep his mouth shut unless there is something in it for him, maybe Severus could oblviate him? lol, cant wait to see how it turns out :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, bad bad bad. I TOTALLY didn't plan that one. People are unpredictable, so I guess characters should be, too. Harry just HAD to hit Malfoy...

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