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Title: Unpleasant Encounters 18 Jun 2022 1:17 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The way you wove Harry’s detention lines into his realization of Snape’s protectiveness over him was beautiful and remarkable. Thank goodness for Kallie. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 29 Mar 2016 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Anastasia Tremaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    'I DO NOT CARE IF HE WAS SETTING FIRE TO MY POTIONS LABORATORY!' The more times I read this piece, the more little things I notice, I love the foreshadowing here, especially considering I have read this story about seven times and only just noticed, This is an absolutely brilliant piece, you've got to write more. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with a cherry on top
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 08 Nov 2009 11:19 am
Reviewer: Kezza (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a fantastic story. I have laughed so Hard I was crying and then cried with sadness. Please keep writing

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks!! Can't ask for much more than that, as a fanfic writer! I hope you continue to enjoy it as much as the story goes on!! Thanks for the review! :0) Rhiannan
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 06 Jun 2009 9:54 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...I hope Flint really gets his comeuppance. I don't think it is within a team captain's purview to beat a team member half to death.

    Sev is so good in this...I love the way he is so patient with Harry despite the kid's very blatant provocation at every turn. I am so glad Severus turned on Filch and that Harry saw what a truly angry SS looks and acts like.

    I love the photos and Harry's attempts to distance himself from the photographic evidence that he did have a mother and that she did love him. I hope that Harry starts to trust Sev soon and that they can develop a strong bond. I think Sev is already more than halfway there, but Harry is too frightened to trust that an adult could really be kind and caring when it comes to him.

    Snape is pretty OOC in this story...oh, we know what he is capable of, sure..but I really don't think Sev's patience would really stretch as far as it has with someone who is so blatently disobedient, even if he does realise that HArry is just covering up all his insecurities with venomous insults and totally unacceptable behaviour. But even if he is OOC, I really love how he is with Harry, and how well he has come to read him.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Hi!!! I was wondering if you missed this chapter! I'm glad you like it. Yeah, maybe Snape is a little OOC...I prefer to think he's changing over time (at least in regards to Harry,) but...anyway that's okay. I kinda like him how he is.
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 30 May 2009 4:56 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Is Flint totally insane? Doesn;t he know that Harry is Snape's ward? And that Snape will KILL him once he finds out who did that to Harry?

    I liked how Severus handled Harry after the prank though and hope he finds out who hurt Harry next chapter. Tell him, Harry!

    And we both updated, yay!

    Author's Response: YAY!! Though now you've got to update again 'cause you left us with that cliffie. (Harry coming back in with Snape right there! OMG I'm like freakin' out! lol) I'm glad you like the chapter! Next is up, yay!
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 29 May 2009 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Regina Caeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!!! I LOVE it! You do the emotions and thoughts so well,and I really enjoy the houmor.Thanks so much for sharing your story.

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! I'm so glad you like it.
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 29 May 2009 7:09 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    haha. Thank you for having it be an interesting ending without me wanting to rip my hair out from anxiety! As always, a wonderful chapter. I love the ever deepening relationship between Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Especially for the comment about the not-cliffie! I tried really hard not to make it a cliffie, (I could have left it when Snape rushed out to find Harry, instead of when Harry woke up) and everyone's mad at me!! lol.
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 29 May 2009 2:09 am
Reviewer: maggiemoo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a fun little fic! I always find myself laughing out loud at least once every chapter. I know that's not much of a review, but I just love this little story! You're doing a great job with it. Keep it up!

    Author's Response: What do you mean, 'not much of a review???' You said nice things!! :-) Thanks!
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 11:48 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol do we like cliffes...heck no! :)

    Loved the chapter as usual, I cant believe Flint was so mean to poor Harry just because of some missed practices! im glad that Kallie went to Severus with it in the end, im looking forward to seeing how he will now deal with Harrys' lying and not getting help when he had told him to :)

    Author's Response: :-) Thanks :-) Next chapter's up...and has much less of a cliffie, I think. lol
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 10:40 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    if this isn't tooooo much of a clifie then I would hate to know what is, lol, (and know that isn't a challenge) loveing the story by the way!!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I totally should've left it when Snape rushed out to find him, instead of when Harry woke up. Then you'd've REALLY wanted to murder me. :-)

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