Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 10:21 am
Reviewer: feyathene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    mwahaha! two Draco's in potions! brilliant! c'mon, you know Sev has to be laughing at some of this stuff despite the irritation factor. =)
    Amazing that even despite seeing Snape go all protective over him because of Filch, Harry still can't get it through his thick skull that maybe bleeding from the kidneys is something that warrants attention. I though we'd had a breakthrough...but I guess one can never forget that he's a stubborn 11yr old, lol.
    A comment more on style: Love the use of Harry's rationalization of his lies and evasions. The contrast between what's said and what's being thought very much allows a reader to empathize with Harry's perceived situation.

    Author's Response: Thanks! (Especially for the last comment - that's exactly what I was going for.) I updated!! Yey!! :-)
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 6:39 am
Reviewer: MissD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Damn I hope Snape kills that bullying arsehole Flint...well, at least once he finds out it was him who hurt Harry. And it's so sad that Harry won't defend himself from physical abuse, even though we know he is a powerful little boy and probably could defend himself very well.

    I also had tears in my eyes when Harry was looking at the photos of his mother...such a heart wrenching moment for him to realize that she loved him but now she's gone and he can't get those feelings back. Poor kid, I just want to wrap him up in a big hug myself and take away all his heartache and fear.

    Please update soon...I love this fic and am anxious to see what's to happen next.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I updated. :-) I'm glad you liked the scene with the photos...that was one of my favs too.
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 4:18 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    "He schlepped"

    -points accusingly-

    although it sort of sounds like how Harry must've felt.

    MINI-FANFIC! -insert confetti-

    "I was schleeping..."
    "You must learn how to pronounce your words properly, Mr. Potter."
    "rawr go away."
    "..."

    Author's Response: Hey!! Schlepp is a perfectly valid word! It's just...yiddish. lol. It means to carry something, or, in this case, to drag. LOL I love the mini fanfic. 'Rawr'
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 4:14 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    AUGH.

    ....AUGH.

    ...I loved the chapter. Why isn't it longer...? ....AUGH.

    -ehem- Sorry. I enjoyed Blaise-and-the-sweater. Blaise is so cool. YAY BLAISE.

    and and and Harry-is-hurt AND GOSH I FORGOT ABOUT KALLIE BUT YAAAY FOR KALLIE and like halfway through I finally realized that 'dude...FLINT IS A JERK. ..poor stupid Harry.'

    Also I think I maybe asked my computer 'RAWR WHY ISN'T SNAPE OMNISCIENT?'

    ...you know what 'm going to say, don't you? I'm going to say it anyhow.

    update-now-please.

    Author's Response: LOL I updated...loved this review, by the way. I like Blaise, too, now that I've figured out who he is a little better. :-)
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 2:39 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Kalie, She's going to be SOO upset with herself--even if she did the right thing.

    Great Chatper!

    V.

    Author's Response: Definitely. Poor little thing. Thanks!
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009 2:18 am
Reviewer: sappysam (Signed) [Report This]
    You naughty bad author!!! How could you do that to us again!! Ok it's not a huge cliffie but it still is one!! As it's such a good chapter though i will forgive you!! Thanks once again for making my night when i seen the alert for your story.

    Author's Response: Hey, I could have left it when Snape rushed out of the room, instead of when Harry woke up! My beta intervened for the sake of my safety. :-)
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 27 May 2009 10:13 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it.

    I see Harry and Snape moving closer together.

    This really shows how an abused child doesn't trust authority figures and when one tries to help, the child will push them away. I guess they figure it won't hurt as bad if they push the teacher away since, in the end, the teacher really won't help.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah, Harry's definitely (too) independent. Poor kid. Things'll get better soon, don't worry. :-)
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 27 May 2009 10:10 pm
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry! Oh Severus! They just need to talk to each other... well actually communicate with each other. They do plenty of talking but not much gets through.
    I was very happy with this update :]

    Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah the two of them make quite an uncomfortable pair. It'll get better. :-)

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