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Reviews For Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat
Amazing that even despite seeing Snape go all protective over him because of Filch, Harry still can't get it through his thick skull that maybe bleeding from the kidneys is something that warrants attention. I though we'd had a breakthrough...but I guess one can never forget that he's a stubborn 11yr old, lol. A comment more on style: Love the use of Harry's rationalization of his lies and evasions. The contrast between what's said and what's being thought very much allows a reader to empathize with Harry's perceived situation. Author's Response: Thanks! (Especially for the last comment - that's exactly what I was going for.) I updated!! Yey!! :-)
I also had tears in my eyes when Harry was looking at the photos of his mother...such a heart wrenching moment for him to realize that she loved him but now she's gone and he can't get those feelings back. Poor kid, I just want to wrap him up in a big hug myself and take away all his heartache and fear. Please update soon...I love this fic and am anxious to see what's to happen next. Author's Response: Thanks!! I updated. :-) I'm glad you liked the scene with the photos...that was one of my favs too.
-points accusingly- although it sort of sounds like how Harry must've felt. MINI-FANFIC! -insert confetti- "I was schleeping..." "You must learn how to pronounce your words properly, Mr. Potter." "rawr go away." "..." Author's Response: Hey!! Schlepp is a perfectly valid word! It's just...yiddish. lol. It means to carry something, or, in this case, to drag. LOL I love the mini fanfic. 'Rawr'
....AUGH. ...I loved the chapter. Why isn't it longer...? ....AUGH. -ehem- Sorry. I enjoyed Blaise-and-the-sweater. Blaise is so cool. YAY BLAISE. and and and Harry-is-hurt AND GOSH I FORGOT ABOUT KALLIE BUT YAAAY FOR KALLIE and like halfway through I finally realized that 'dude...FLINT IS A JERK. ..poor stupid Harry.' Also I think I maybe asked my computer 'RAWR WHY ISN'T SNAPE OMNISCIENT?' ...you know what 'm going to say, don't you? I'm going to say it anyhow. update-now-please. Author's Response: LOL I updated...loved this review, by the way. I like Blaise, too, now that I've figured out who he is a little better. :-)
Great Chatper! V. Author's Response: Definitely. Poor little thing. Thanks!
Author's Response: Hey, I could have left it when Snape rushed out of the room, instead of when Harry woke up! My beta intervened for the sake of my safety. :-)
I see Harry and Snape moving closer together. This really shows how an abused child doesn't trust authority figures and when one tries to help, the child will push them away. I guess they figure it won't hurt as bad if they push the teacher away since, in the end, the teacher really won't help. Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah, Harry's definitely (too) independent. Poor kid. Things'll get better soon, don't worry. :-)
I was very happy with this update :] Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah the two of them make quite an uncomfortable pair. It'll get better. :-) |
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