| Title: Care
| 04 Jun 2009 2:33 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great Chapter. This chapter took a long time for harry to see that people care about him. Harry and snape need a major sit down at detention tongith and snape needs to punsih him. Harry needs to be brought under control.
Author's Response: Thanks!! You'll have to wait and see...
I really liked this one, especially the way you had Harry being confused over why people care about him and how he keeps misinterpreting everything that Snape does when it comes to being nice and concerned over him and Blaise as well. But I do hope he lets Severus help him and Marcus Flint deserves to be skinned and hung out to dry!
I wonder how Severus will punish Harry?
Can't wait to see what you think of the punishment I gave Harry in THH. It's up now!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Yah Marcus Flint is a real bastard. You'll have to wait and see...
| Title: Care
| 04 Jun 2009 12:56 am
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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I like! Very very much so!
Author's Response: Yey!! I'm very very glad you do!!
Awww poor Harry seemed to have an awful lot of self contemplation in this chapter, poor guy cant seem to understand that he is cared for at all, I do hope that his friends and especially Severus can help him to see that they do, I think I may just crack my face with a huge grin when the first hug happens with Harry and Severus...it will come...right?? lol
Author's Response: LOL everything in its own time...But yeah, this is definitely a 'poor Harry' chapter. He's so confused. :-)
I really like the realistic way you are portraying Harry's emotions and confusion in this story. Also, I like the way you are characterizing Blaise and the other students and especially Professor Snape. The psychological issues are being treated realistically but not in a way that impedes the flow of the story. I can honestly say that this is one of the best "Harry-Sorted-into-Slytherin" stories that I have ever read.
Author's Response: WOW!! Thanks!! :-)
This is developing quite nicely. Congratulations on a turbulent chapter that makes one reflect on a lot of things.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm much fun :0)
I love this story. Harry is so good as an abused child that doesn't know how to trust. Severus is great as the adult who has to keep trying to reach him.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like my story :-) You're the 200th reviewer, by the way. :-)
That was an incredibly good chapter. I really hope that you update soon because I like the fact that Harry is finally beginning to see what's under his nose but I want to know how this situation is going to be resolved.
Author's Response: Yeys!!! Glad you like it!! I usually update about every 5 days, so...soon!
OH Wow! That was a rough (emotionally) chapter! Bravo!
Poor Harry just really doesn't get it does he? He just can't see one reason that anyone would care for him, that he has any real value. The confusion he felt when talking to Blaze about WHY Sev was angry was SO telling.
I'm really looking forward to "what's next" for our boy--is there a chance that he might extend a bit of trust to our beloved bat of the dungeon? (I Hope)
V.
Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah this has not been the easiest couple of days for Harry. Hopefully he'll get things figured out as he spends more time with Sev. :-)
| Title: Care
| 03 Jun 2009 8:46 pm
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| Reviewer: maksim (Anonymous)
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Liked it very much. Feels like a turning point to the whole story.
The last dialogue with Blaise was perhaps a little bit too long, but maybe that's just me being impatient.
And another cliffhanger! I like those, too. Gives you something to look forward to.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like cliffies. I try not to do too many, but sometimes they're unavoidable, and then people yell at me. lol :-)
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