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Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh! Poor confused Harry! I'm so glad Blaise cleared things up for him (well, i suppose it kinda just added more confusion but at least it's about the truth).
    Poor Harry, everyone is so mad at him! He's never had anyone care about him (that he can remember, anyway) so he just doesn't know how to deal with it. I'm eagerly awaiting his discussion with Severus. Maybe they can actually muddle through Harry's confusion and actually talk. That could just be wishful thinking though. Poor Harry. *huggles Harry plushie* He won't even call Lily his mum, and "to bother", oh Harry, don't you understand, just because you think you don't need caring doesn't mean you're right.
    And yes, I like :]

    Author's Response: :-) I'm glad :-) Yeah Blaise isn't stupid, which is helpful to Harry at the moment. :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 5:27 pm
Reviewer: SiriusLives (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am loving you story and hope that you have a long way to go! Harry in this is so very real (it's kind of sad actually) and Snape is so patient. Can't wait to see what happens next and what happens to a certain nasty Captain.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Yeah I feel kinda bad for Sev - he's trying so hard, and Harry still doesn't trust him. :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter a lot. Harry really needs to change his thinking on a very basic level, going against most of the experiences he's had in the past. It's great to see that struggle on the page, and show that it's not quick or simple. Also, people who seem like victims will often get vicimized again (like what happened with Flint) and that just reinforces that world view. The detentions seem invaluable now, because they force Harry to come to Sev when he would normally avoid him, and the positive interactions are working to help them slowly connect.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you think I'm doing this well - I try, but this is the first time I've seriously tried creative writing, so I'm not always sure how I do.
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 12:27 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Most definitely!

    Harry is so confused! I'm loving reading his slow progression from what he was at the beginning of term to what he is now - he is SO in denial. Anyway, I'm really glad you updated (that last chapter was a cliffhanger and a half) and this chapter surpassed everything I'd hoped it to be. I think you got Harry's puzzlement about why everyone was angry with him spot on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter already!

    Author's Response: Thanks!!! Much fun :-) I'm glad you liked this chapter so much. I liked it, too, to be honest. :0) <=bunny smiley
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 12:12 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I seemed to have missed the previous chapter somehow. That was great. Poor Harry, I hope that Flint gets whats coming to him the little, you know what!

    I hope that Harry finally lets Snape in. He desperately needs someone to care about him.

    Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it. I think we all want to see Flint get his comeuppance. (Including Snape, and what Snape wants...) :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 10:31 am
Reviewer: honourary_weasley (Signed) [Report This]
    I like! :D

    I want to get to the bit where Harry finally tells Snape more about the Dursleys - I want to see his reaction! Still, I like the pace this is going, and I hope Flint gets his a*** expelled for almost killing a first year... and for muggle duelling!

    Author's Response: We shall see...don't worry. I haven't forgotten about the Dursleys (or Flint, for that matter), and neither has Sev.
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 8:27 am
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    What's going to happen to Flint? Please don't have Flint get a slap across the wrist and only be expelled.

    Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see... *evil grin*

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