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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Anger and Fear 26 Jun 2009 5:24 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Severus lol, I wouldnt want to be on the wrong side of Minerva!

    Author's Response: Yeah especially when one of her Lions (or pseudo-Lions) is involved! LOL Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Anger and Fear 26 Jun 2009 6:28 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sure it was tough to write, but you did a masterful job of it.

    Bravo.
    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what Molly will say to Ron? or do to him?

    It was nice to see Minerva and Severus trying to help Harry together and I think Sev has finally gotten a clue that it's not him personally Harry is scared of, but what he is . . .a man. And more importantly, a man of authority. Harry doesn't have a good frame of reference towards authoritative males given what he went through.

    Hopefully that will change.

    Author's Response: :-) We'll see. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw that was so sweet. Aw, I know it has to be a slow process, but I'm so looking forward to the day, where Harry really places his trust in Severus. Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it. :-) Working on the next already. It's a little tough 'cause nothing happens in canon in the month of October before Halloween, so it might be slow. Things between Harry and Sev should be okay now, though. (I hope. It all depends on Harry, of course.)
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 7:09 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay!!! Somehow I missed your last update, too, so I got two chapters. It was very exciting. Thank you!! Please update soon, this story rocks my world!!! And Harry is really starting to come around, I love it.

    Author's Response: :-) Glad you like it. Working on the next. I've run out of canon, so updates will probably come a little slower for awhile. Thanks for reviewing!! :-)
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 6:27 pm
Reviewer: frostedmidnight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay, another chapter! I can't wait to see where this goes now that Harry is finally starting to trust Severus somewhat..Poor Ron. He deserved punishment but.... I wouldn't want to be sent to an angry Mrs. Weasley either...ouch...I hope he and Harry don't fight for to long!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! I'm glad you like it! Yeah I feel bad for Ron, too. The whole weekend?! But that's what Molly said and I follow her lead. lol
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 4:18 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a *great* chapter. If it's short, it's hard to tell subjectively because it's such an emotional roller coaster. Chapters are like paragraphs: they should end when they're done, long or short doesn't matter. I continue to love Harry's inner monologue-- very realistic (as well as heartbreaking). The dialogue in this chapter is excellent-- both the fight between the kids and the adult arguement.

    I was surprised by McGonagal's slap...I'm not saying it was wrong...but it was a bit much between long-term colleagues. But it did add some drama to the scene and seemed to illustrate for Harry Snape's forbearance and remorse.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Yeah I just felt like McGonagall was pissed off enough to hit Sev. I think of them as more than colleagues - they are both in the Order, for example, so they know each other quite well in various contexts. W/e thanks for reviewing!!
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 9:52 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    One interesting point about your fic that was never touched on in canon; Harry doesn't trust grown-ups very much. He tends to deal with problems on his own, rather than asking a 'trusted teacher'. Harry had no one to trust before coming to Hogwarts, so he keeps that up.

    Your fic takes this point, and shows off what could have happened had Harry been forced to face this fact.

    I'm interested to see where you take this.

    (^_^)/
    BEM

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like it.

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