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Title: Once a Death Eater 10 Jul 2009 2:36 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! I do so love Severus!

    Author's Response: Good!! Me too. lol thanks for reviewing. :-)
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 11:54 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello! I really enjoy this fic, but where is Voldemort? I mean, I know he possesed Quirrel but when is Harry going to confront him? I'd really like to see the fic converge with the first book plot!

    Author's Response: Glad you like it, and sorry for the wait on the Voldemort issue. The problem I'm facing is that in canon, Harry doesn't get very far at all with Quirrel before Halloween, and we haven't gotten there, yet. I'd speed it up, but I'm trying to follow canon while not missing the first crucial months of the Harry/Sev relationship. If you have any suggestions to fix it, I'm all ears. I've asked my beta about it but neither of us have any ideas. :-) Thanks for reviewing! Rhiannan
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    Only if you update in the next...ten seconds. -counts down on stopwatch-

    YAY YOU UPDAAATED. You can have more butterscotches now.

    Uhmmm...Yeah. I really really love the entirety of this story, it's brilliant, and amazing, and 'Horus Slughorn' SHOULD be 'Horace Slughorn'.

    Author's Response: LOL yeah I fixed the spelling. Dumb me. (Then again, my beta didn't catch it either...lol) Yey butterscotches. Will work on next chappie.
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: R2M (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It was amazing! I loved it!! Can't wait for the next update

    Author's Response: Great!!! Glad you like! :-)
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 6:02 pm
Reviewer: feyathene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like your portrayal of Severus in this chapter, especially during his meeting with Albus. =)

    Thank you for updating! I got all excited when I saw your title on the recent listing. ^_^

    Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it! It's getting some mixed responses, which I expected, but I figured I should show Snape for who he is when he's not trying to be careful with Harry, or teaching class. Thanks for reviewing!!
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 5:38 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the green dress, it was great! Side note Horace is spelled wrong (you have it as Horus)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! And I fixed the name. Whoops. :-)
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I'm enjoying the talks between Sev and Dumbledore as much as Dumbledore seems to-- they are wonderfully full of dry humor and debate. And the parallel between their relationship and Sev and Harry's-- which Dumbledore is quite aware of and Sev seems not to be-- is delightful. The section with Harry is also quite good, but because of his problems, his progress is slow and frustrating at times (realistic, yes... but often not fun).

    Author's Response: Yeah, slow. It'll happen. One thing to point out is that this is still before canon Halloween - Harry has known Sev for less than two months. Thanks for reviewing! :-)
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 5:12 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I never thought that I would feel sorry for Snape, but I do. Harry is really not softening up at all towards him, is he? Or if he is, it is very slowly.

    I really wish that he would see that Snape is trying to help him. He is so darned stubborn.

    I'm glad to see that you've updated.

    It is horrible what Snape has done to Flint. I'm glad the kid is gone though, I just wish that there had been another way. Two wrongs don't make a right.

    As usual, your writing is superb and this story remains exciting and intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Slowly, slowly. It'll happen. Yeah, we definitely saw a different side of Snape, in this chapter. I meant it that way, but it's still a little rough. Thanks for reviewing! Rhiannan
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, it was [worth the wait, that is]

    :D

    Author's Response: :D
Title: Once a Death Eater 09 Jul 2009 5:05 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Totally worth the wait! I love how you manaage to express Severus' confusion over Harry, and still keep him in character.

    Author's Response: :-) Yey. Glad you like it. :-)

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