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Reviews For Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat
Author's Response: I'm glad. :0) Unfortunately, the chapter is taking longer than expected, but no worries - I'm working on it. :0)
Author's Response: Thanks!!! So glad you like it!! The next chapter should be out in a week or two - it's going slow, but I am working on it. :0)
I've never read such a defiant Harry before and I must say you've done a marvelous job with it. His mistrust and fear is heartbreaking and at times I find myself frustrated with his inability to care about himself and can't wait for Snape to finally break him down. I'm really looking forward to the eventual acceptance of someone caring about him. Do you think you'll ever allow him to be so comfortable with Snape as to let Snape touch him? I'm such a huge fan of Snape comfort, but Harry is in such an impossible place right now it's hard to ever imagine him hugging Snape or ever letting all his fear, pain, and misery out. In the meantime I'm thoroughly enjoying Harry's journey. Your characters are so different from anything I've ever read before, and though I was a little unsure if I'd like your version of Harry, I find myself becoming more and more of a fan with each chapter. I really like how Harry has friends in both houses too. It brings another dynamic to a brilliant fic. Thanks for sharing it with us! Regards, Shoon Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm so glad you like it! And thanks for the review!!
Its the first time for me (or i think so) when im commenting this story. First of all your story is really wonderfull, sometimes sad sometimes fluffy ^^ I really like. Im not native english so i had few difficultes with understanding what you wrote but for this ff i was ready to spend few hours in my dictionary ;d I really enjoyed this one. I hope that you will be able to combine writting it with your studies. Best Regards ^^ Author's Response: Hi!! I am glad you like it, and glad that you are willing to put in some effort to read it! I have started writing the next chapter, but I am also very busy. I will try to get it out as soon as I can. :-)
I will be looking forward to the enxt, regardless of how long it takes. I hope school is working out for you. Lesley~ Author's Response: :0) Glad you liked the happier chapter. It was refreshing for me, too. So far school is being AMAZING, though a lot of work. The chapter is going to take at least a couple more weeks, while I adjust to doing 4-8 hours of homework a day. That said, I'm really glad to be back. Thanks for the review, Les. Rhiannan :0)
Blaise gave a slow, incredulous grin. “Are you telling us you dressed him in drag? I thought that was just a rumor!” He sounds so much like Theo here. Blaise needs to get out more, he's too Slytherinish. “Oh, great! So it's not a coup, it's a mutiny.” --So far, this is Best Hermione Line. “Only Gryffindor, actually. The Ravens and Puffs don't mess with us, or us with them. We only fight with Lions 'cause you fight with us. You just don't like it because we're practical and escalate faster than you do, so we win.” THE PUFFS. I WANNA BE A PUFF. Harry exchanged a look with Blaise. She's never going to get it. --Thank you for realizing that, Harry dearest. It was almost like the room had a mind. --That's not scary -at all-. 'dude, you've got magic enough to create a fake ceiling for the Great Hall and windows in the dungeon, and you can't make the place handicap accessible?' ---YAAY HARRY. Maybe the best line in the chapter? Why is this review just me quoting things and then saying 'yaaay'?! “Then what'd you do?” “Magic.” --IT'S MAGICAL, HARRY. EVERYTHING IN HOGWARTS IS -MAGICAL-. He's playing. I didn't even know he did that. ---...AWW. “Unless you wish a detention --Weird structure there, Snapadoodle. ....I did not just say 'Snapadoodle'. I DENY EVERYTHING.. He was happy to see her anyway, though. Ball pits got more fun by measure of the number of people in them. This is true. Now, if only -Snape- would get in the ball pit... She jumped in without saying another word, leaving Severus gaping. “Who knew? An intelligent Gryffindor,” commented Blaise, before turning towards the ladder and climbing down. --WINWINWINWINWIN Dude, you're worried that Petunia wouldn't approve? Like everything else here would be her favorite thing. You're a real fucktard, you know that? --..poor Harry. Malfoy-blond -Malfoys need to like, patent that color and sell it as a hair dye. : long, straight and unruly black with rainbow flecks. --OH THAT'S AWESOME “Do you realize how frustrating that is?” She asked, accepting the feather duster from Harry. “Errm...sorry?” --DUDE. He sounds like when he said 'oops' in that chapter with Madam Pomfrey. sorry I'm not very clear, there be a purring cat on me. “A pen, Professor. Welcome to the 20th century.” Harry has just totally introduced wizards to the 20th century. WIN WIN WIN “Yup. It's like a self-inking quill except it has a limited amount of ink and doesn't drip.” “That would be...quite useful. May I see it?” “Sure. Just don't undo it. I don't really know what I did.” --Heehee. , adeptly transfiguring it into a pen of her own. --She has a crazy-awesome fountain pen thing, doesn't she? --Okay. IT IS NOW SEPTEMBER, YOU ARE REQUIRED TO UPDATE, IT IS LAW thank you. Author's Response: LOL your comment about the Puffs just gave me the best/worst (depends on who you talk to) idea!! POWERPUFFS FTW!!!! LOL thanks for the (three!!!) reviews!!! I enjoyed them very much. I love the quote + yay! format, by the way. Makes me really happy. :0) And I will try to update soon, but I'm still in my first week here and need time - I've been spending 4-8 hours a day on homework. Promise I'll write this weekend, but chapter won't be finished for at least a couple weeks yet. Sorries. Rhiannan
BUT. FEEDBACK. I -love- the ball pit. and Blaise. It was my signature for awhile, actually. "“I've never been much for rules in any sense, Professor,” Harry admitted, still green. " WIN WIN WIN ack. I really don't actually have much time right now. -hands over large bag of butterscotches- Munch on these while I try to find that dratted clock (punfail). -anyhow- UPDAAAAATEEEEE. -ehem- And now I really do have to go. Author's Response: LOL I was wondering what happened to you...I like your excuses. I should try some of those and delay the update for another month. (Kidding! Don't shoot me!) Glad you liked the chapter so much, and thanks as always for the cybercandy. Much appreciated. And eww punfail. :0) lol see you. Rhiannan |
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