Great chapter! Looking forward to more RoR conversations ahead!
Hahahah! You're so funny! xD
Snape vs. Harry! LOL. Bril!
Poor Severus must've just about had a heart-attack watching Harry climb down the wall, though. O_O And Harry's first encounter with Sinistra... *shakes head* No wonder they don't get along!
Great chapter! ^^
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| 14 Mar 2010 5:53 am
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| Reviewer: Doni (Anonymous)
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Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! This chapter is priceless. I lMAO over the whole passing a note in potions part. I especially LOVED Snapes response to the note.
Author's Response: Yey!! Thanks for the review!! And I'm glad you liked!! :0) Rhiannan
| Title: Boundaries
| 09 Nov 2009 7:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Nazgurl (Anonymous)
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Harry's character is really likeable; the perfect mix of vulnerability and independence, childishness and maturity.
I love Snape as well - a more mild take on his character, but very well done.
I love the interaction between characters as well - Harry's friends have great personalities, especially Theo.
The humor in this story is great too - clever and rich, and it flows so well with the serious parts.
The effect of Dursley abuse on Harry is really interesting - it's different!
Everything about this is really well done - it's a real gem in fanfiction!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Hey!! Thanks so much for the nice long review!! I'm so glad you like the fic!! I'm enjoying it, too, and I'm doing my best to get the next bit out. It's taking awhile. :0) Thanks again!!
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| 22 Oct 2009 9:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Pati (Anonymous)
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wonderful chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!!
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| 22 Oct 2009 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Pati (Anonymous)
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wonerful chapter
Author's Response: Glad you like!!
| Title: Boundaries
| 22 Oct 2009 1:17 am
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| Reviewer: MooseThatBite (Anonymous)
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Hey Nannan, Awesome chapter!!, I know I've been far too long without reading it, many apologies. I'd suggest going over the scene with Sinestra one more time though. I'd perhaps tone down the cursing & consider having her get angry somewhat slower. He is HARRY POTTER after all, and she's never met him before, so unless you are meaning for her to be a closet Death Eater, and perhaps even so, maybe have her start off being a bit careful around him. Plus that uncontrolled that fast seemed sorta unlikely. Much love and hugs!! I's like your fic. :) [*[*[:0) cat-in-the-hat bunny.
Author's Response: You always have the most unique user names, sister mine. Thanks for the feedback on Sinestra - I figured there was something up with that scene, but couldn't put a finger on it. I'm glad you like the chapter overall, and I really like your bunny. :0)
I can't wait until you post chapter 21!!
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Happy Bunny! ^.^
Author's Response: :0) Thanks!!
I'm torn as to what to say about this story. Don't get me wrong it's fabulous. I guess the best way to put it is...this is a well-written emotional rollarcoaster and I can't wait to see where you take me next.
Author's Response: Hmm...that's sort of what I'm going for, so I suppose that's good. :0) Thanks!!
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