This chapter was a wonderful read. Harry needed to test his assumptions, Snape fulfilled his promise, that kitten was a perfect match for your Harry, and the aftermath of it all was touching and revealing.
ahw, why didn't he take psycho with him? I like her already. Though I must admit that your addition of Kallie was awesome already
I love Kallie! ^^ She has quite a delightful personality for a house elf. :D
Excellent chapter - poor Harry - I loved it!
I am trying to find the group but I can't get to it. Can you post a link?
| Title: Going Home
| 24 Jan 2010 1:48 pm
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| Reviewer: racoon (Anonymous)
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Love the chapter! Looking forward for next))
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! I'm working on the next!
| Title: Going Home
| 17 Jan 2010 4:58 am
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| Reviewer: scalvim (Anonymous)
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I normally dislike WIP's, but I opened an exception for your story, and frankly I've not regretted it for a moment! Thank you for rewarding my faith in good fanfics! Loved your story so far. Your Harry is just so adorably clever and dumb at the same time! also I’m really very keen on your Zabini, I can count by my fingers the fics I've read in which this character (that is by norm a OC), didn't bored me senseless. Oh, on the constructive critic section ( I always put one of these in my reviews) I think you should work more on your Dumbledore, I like him and all, and your great jokes and awesomely sarcastic sense of humor, do make him a likable character, but as a reader I felt that there was something missing in his characterization, maybe because your main characters have such strong personalities it makes Dumbledore seem kind of blank to me, but it’s still fine 'cause he does make its contribution to the flow of the story. To finish this review in a high note, because that's what you most sincerely deserve for writing such a great fic, your Snape touched my heart, and that says it all. This said consider this review a bribe, from fanfiction readers all around the world (I'm from Portugal, so you’ve reached this far,lol) and please update soon!XD (almost forgot, if you wish to reply to this review, please check the name scalvim in the search by Author section on Fanfiction.com, and leave me a message!thanks!)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing my fic!! I'm so glad you read and enjoyed it! I especially appreciate the constructive criticism on Dumbledore - I think you're right, and I haven't focussed on pinning down his character as much as I should. As for the update, for the moment I'm working on Outcast's Alley, but I'm almost finished the chapter, and LDTH will update as soon after that as I can manage. (Generally around a week.) I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic, and I thank you again for reviewing, Rhiannan
Now THAT was a truely wonderful chapter. Our boy may just be able to learn after all--all he has to do is accept the learning! ;-)
Your story is still top notch! I look forward to every installment.
V.
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks for the review!!
Yay another awesome chapter to this awesome story. I love Kallie's personality. I wish Harry got to keep that cat in the pet shop. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!!
AWWWW!
This one made me want to cry and laugh (not much but there were some cute-funny moments ^^) and so many squishy gorgeous moments that left me with that squishy gorgeous feeling of squishy gorgeousness ^-^
Thanks for the squishy!
Hoping for more snape/harry bonding soon but very happy to reread this bit too ^^
have fun!
x
Author's Response: LOL squishy gorgeous feeling of squishy gorgeousness. It sounds like you're describing swimming in spagetti, or something. Actually, it reminds me of finding Nemo. 'I shall name you squishy and you shall be mine and you will be my squishy" Anyway, glad you like! :0) Thanks for the review!
| Title: Going Home
| 13 Jan 2010 4:53 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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I was so happy that Severus and Harry hugged that I squealed and nearly woke everyone in the house up! I'm so glad they're progressing in their relationship. Severus' words were awesome, "...have My. Child." Perfect.
Author's Response: LOL glad you liked it. That part made me happy, too. :0) Thanks for the review!!
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