It's a great chapter. I'll admit to being a bit dismayed that it's going to end so suddenly... we'll just have to wait and see if this can be satisfactorily closed in a single chapter. The piece has been brilliant so far, I can only hope the ending is worthy of such a good story.
Author's Response: LOL, as it happens, it's not gonna be just one. It ended up being crazy long, so I split it. But it will be only two, plus MAYBE an epilogue. Don't worry, it has a relatively logical ending-point. :0) Thanks for the review!
This is the second to last chapter?? Is there going to be a sequel??
Author's Response: Nope, no sequel, just lots and lots of oneshots from various parts of Snape and Harry's lives(including, probably, one or two from the rest of first year) and the lives of the other characters. :0) Thanks for the review!
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| 16 Jun 2010 4:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Sarah Keough (Anonymous)
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Loved this chapter so much, can't wait for the next one. Please write more soon!! Also can't wait for the snippets later on in life, particularly from different years... I hope there's lots of them! It will be interesting to see how you perceive their relationship developing over Harry's years at Hogwarts and throughout the war.
Author's Response: :0) Glad you like! Thanks for the review!! I'm looking forward to writing the oneshots, too. Should be fun.
Aw, poor Harry. Severus has to fix this and soon. Tell Harry you want to make it permanent Sev!!!
Oh, I'm going to miss this story so much, but there is a solution you know--it's called a SEQUEL!!!!
I'm sure that there are a lot of votes for a sequel. :) Pretty please with sugar on top? (puppy dog eyes)
Author's Response: LOL, yeah, there are lots of votes for a sequel, but I'm missing one vote: my muse. I might write a slightly longer story of one of the later years (maybe 3rd or 5th?) but that'll be the closest to a sequel I can do. I'm not done with the characters, yet, but I really want the time to work on other stories. Anyway, thanks for the review!! I'm glad you like it!
| Title: Reality
| 15 Jun 2010 5:34 am
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| Reviewer: Anom #37 (Anonymous)
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very very good chapter!!! thank you for updating - this is one of my favorite stories! Sad to hear it will end soon but looking forward to seeing where you will take it.
Author's Response: :0) Thanks! Glad you like!! And I hope you'll like the oneshots :0)
| Title: Reality
| 15 Jun 2010 2:11 am
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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cant wait for the next chapter to come up!!!! its great so far!!!! :D
Author's Response: :0) Yey! Thanks!
| Title: Reality
| 14 Jun 2010 11:43 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Beautiful! You have conveyed Severus's hesitation very beautifully. I love Dumbledore as you have portrayed him.
Hope to see the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: Yey, glad you like!! Thanks for the review!!
No sequel?? noooooooooooooo how can it end? I know all good stories must but its so bloody sad when they do, I flippen love this story and could have read at least 20 more chapters about their lives...to see if Harry ever believes that Severus really does care and accepts the fact and maybe even loves him in return! anywho im looking forward to more to see how you end it :)
Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! I'm so glad you've enjoyed this so much. I have, too. Thanks for the review!!
| Title: Reality
| 14 Jun 2010 7:07 pm
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| Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous)
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I was a bit worried when you said there is only one more chapter, but I can kinda see where this is going. I hope you write a lot of one-shots in this universe. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! As it turns out, it's gonna be 2 more chapters. And there should be lots of one-shots. :0)
A good but sad chapter, and not just because it is the second to last chapter.
Author's Response: :0) Yeah, I liked this chapter, but it was also sad. Poor Harry, poor Sev. Hopefully things'll even out, soon.
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