I just want you to know that you wrote this chapter so well, the suspense I was feeling caused me to have a near panic attack at someone downstairs blowing their nose, really fucking great chapter
Love, love, love this penultimate chapter.
I LOVE this story :P Have read it a minimum of a dozen times :P It always cheers me up :)
I am so in love with this fic, I think I might have to do something to grieve when it ends... or to celebrate its life... like rereading it daily... or something...
How can you not love this protective, possessive and (when it comes to Harry) push-over Sev? I just wanna cuddle him and keep him under my bed to pull out for warm fuzzies on rainy days. Absolutely adore that last line... hes so gorgeous but he can be so silly, does he really think he wont be adopting Harry at some point, likely very soon? Silly Sev. As always your Harry's development is really well paced too, Im looking forward to what you write once this is finished (please tell me you have plans for your talent after this is over? *holds breath in nervous anticipation... and passes out...*)
Have fun! ^^ (and much love for your bunnies which are always interesting, even with beauty marks)
Wow. This chapter was dramatic. I can't believe Severus is actually thinking about who would take the boy. HELLO! HE'S YOUR CHILD. YOU TAKE HIM. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Oh Severus. That last sentence shows how lost he is in this all. Someone else to care for "his child"? Is he mad? I don't think he'd ever find anyone that he thinks will be good enough to take care of Harry. *shakes head*
I do hope it resolves quite happily. I'm a sucker for angst that ends with fluff :]
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| 20 Jul 2010 12:25 am
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| Reviewer: Ellie K (Anonymous)
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I agree with other commenters here - Snape wondering about who will take Harry in for the summer was the funniest part of the chapter. Let's hope he figures it out by morning; maybe it'll come to him in his sleep :)
I like how Harry finally (finally) is really truly realizing that Snape isn't going to get rid of him, and that he isn't going to get rid of Snape. I thought Snape's reactions were well-done, and that Harry's musings about all of it were moving. Anyway, I hope you keep writing more fics, even shorter ones, in this universe; Snape and Harry have a really special bond here and an amusing way of sparring with each other.
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| 19 Jul 2010 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: feyathene (Anonymous)
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Oh, I love your Harry and Severus.
I was depressed and excited at the same time when I saw you on the update list since I thought this was going to be your last chapter, but I guess you're just enjoying leaving us hanging....
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| 19 Jul 2010 7:49 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Love the story... I can't wait for more.. Hope you update soon
AWWW! How cute! It is such a tearjerker-I'm actually crying! Very good, please continue!! (Now have to get a tissue)
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