I'm so sad that this story is over! But that was a good ending, very solid. I kinda wish the bottom of the page didn't still say "To Be Continued". It makes me too hopeful.
| Title: His Child
| 24 Jul 2010 11:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Cadiya (Anonymous)
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WOW! I was reading a lot of "Snape adops Harry Fic" But this is one of the best ever. I really like the way you show Harry as a very gifted but also very difficult kid. And you have a very good stile in writing. I would hope to reade more about this. About there first summer together, there second year... Is there a chance?
That last speech by Severus was brilliant; I almost cried. Thank you for a wonderful story.
That was truly beautiful Rhiannon.
I'm so sad to see it end, but I'm hoping that you'll have not only an Epilogue, but some short stories, as you've mentioned, in this universe. Maybe a sequel eventually?
I love how you made Snape lose his resolve, in the face of Harry's puppy-dog eyes! LOL! That was very sweet.
Congratulations on finishing the story, and I definitely hope I read more from you in the future.
| Title: His Child
| 24 Jul 2010 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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That was absolutely beautiful ending to a beautiful heart warming story. Cudos!
Aww that was sweet, great job!
This has been a lovely story. It's sad to see it finishing and I've got tears in my eyes from the last part of this chapter.
Thank you.
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh. man I'm gonna miss this story soooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!
| Title: His Child
| 24 Jul 2010 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: min (Anonymous)
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So Good! No, it can't end here!
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