Ugg, I keep trying to tell myself 'one more chapter and then I'll go to sleep' and then you throw something like this at me!
Really enjoying this story - clearly it's got some incredible potential with just the premise. And, while I'm not usually a fan of duel perspective chapters in the format you're using, it's incredibly well written - giving a unique view from both Harry and Snape fairly evenly.
And now I return to not sleeping...
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| 04 Jan 2011 12:49 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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This was a great story! I have definitely enjoyed reading it for the past few days.
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| 31 Dec 2010 9:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Alexa (Anonymous)
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This is the best story I have read so far on this website and many others.
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| 01 Dec 2010 4:51 am
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| Reviewer: Onaleia (Anonymous)
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This was LOVELY! I thoroughly enjoyed every minute. I'm only sorry I hadn't read it sooner. I've no idea now why I'd skipped over it in the past.
Every interaction was very real to me, very believable. Thank you for taking the time to do such a wonderful job.
Yay! Sappy though it may sound, I have warm fuzzies, now. (Okay, so I am a sap, anyway - never claimed otherwise.)
I've really enjoyed this story from the very beginning. You write well and have a wonderful way of portraying the characters. The progression of Severus and Harry's relationship with one another was well-paced and believable. You have done a really good job with this tale and I absolutely love it.
Bravo! ^^
Poor guys! I like Harry's encounter with the Mirror of Erised.
Well writ.
Might I say, 'Ouch'? It's not only frustrating, but painful when someone you care about suddenly pulls away and you can't figure out the reason behind it. Poor Severus. And Harry. Any everyone else, for that matter, as they're getting caught in the backlash.
Good chapter.
I hate when I can't sleep. >.- But Harry's got a room, now! ^^ Me likey.
Good chap!
Snape's really getting a feel for how to deal with Harry, isn't he?
Well written!
Hmph. Well, maybe that would make the woman think. Intolerant harpy. *glare*
Poor Harry - all those flashbacks. Poor, poor young kid...
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