Poor guy. Having some of the only control he in his life stripped away must be really hard. I think you portrayed his possible response to everything very well.
"Oops," indeed. LOL
I really like your Poppy. ^^
Liked the whole evasion - kid knows how to run, though, he'd certainly need to know how. *frown* Loved Harry's response to Snape's howler: “He cheated." ^^
Really great chapter! Well written, too. Can't wait to read what happens next.
He did that, alright!
Couldn't help but feel a little bit of sympathy for poor Severus, though. I mean, sheesh, *I* was wincing, and Dumbledore wasn't even talking to me!
Great chapter. ^^
Interesting... Already we've a glimpse of how Harry's home life may have influenced the way he conducts himself.
A great start - I like it!
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| 11 Aug 2010 1:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Ilaria (Anonymous)
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I have this big, dorky grin on my face. That was brilliant.
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| 09 Aug 2010 10:51 am
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| Reviewer: Nazgurl (Anonymous)
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Perfect ending. Thank you for this WONDERFUL story. It really was a joy, start to end.
*wibbles* That - was - such a BEAUTIFUL chapter. Thank you so much for writing it - I look forward to whatever you have planned for the end, but believe me I am so sad this is ending!
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| 04 Aug 2010 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Nah, there has to be a sequal
I like it. The only thing I would change is having two versions of the same events. Really we only needed to see the one version of the hospital wing instead of having two separated pieces of Harry and Snape's perspectives. You can blend them together into once scene.
I like your story a lot!
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