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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 2:24 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I am looking for a hankie now, becasue I was in tears as Harry was apologizing to Kallie.
    Love the Prank War! I wonder will Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff get in the game as well?

    Author's Response: Aww...I'm glad you liked it. You'll have to see...hehehe I'm the only one who knows. :-)
Title: Care 07 Jun 2009 3:52 am
Reviewer: Phoenix Phyre (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. I feel sorry that Harry seems to care so little for himself, but I can sorta see why. No one had really cared about him for the first 10 years of his life (that he was with the Dursleys), so he has so sense of self-worth. He doesn't even know how to take things at face value, like the fact that Severus seems to truly care for him (hell, Sev doesn't even like to admit it!) but the thing is, his friends, his house-elf, and Severus truly do care for him. He will hopefully come to realize this before he has ruined the chances he has been given to have a family in his friends and Severus.

    Author's Response: :-) Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like it. :-)
Title: Care 06 Jun 2009 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't like- I love.

    (:

    Author's Response: I glad. :-)
Title: Care 06 Jun 2009 11:07 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    At last! Harry is thinking, he is thinking very, very hard. Still fighting, but I think the battle has turned. He is still fighting though. His instincts will not be denied.

    I like your Blaise but he is a very different person to the one I have become used to in canon and most other fics I have read. I do like that he and Theo have accepted the two lions into their little conclave with HArry. I think I told you once, long ago that Theodore attempted to kill HArry in one of my fics. He is a nasty piece of works.

    Anyway, am eager for Harry to really start caring for Snape as much as Sev cares for him. It is so sad that Harry refers to his mother as Mrs Potter. And I note he hasn't gone and asked anyone for photos of James as Sev told him to do. One more person that HArry does not want to know about who might have cared for him.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Hi Lesley! Yeah I made no attempt to follow canon for Blaise and Theo - we don't see a lot of them in canon, anyway, and Harry needed friends. :-) The story ends up not being as close to canon as I was originally thinking, but it would be dumb to try and change that, now. Yup. He also hasn't looked again at the photos of 'Mrs. Potter' See you!! Next chapter will be up in a couple of days. :-)
Title: Unpleasant Encounters 06 Jun 2009 9:54 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...I hope Flint really gets his comeuppance. I don't think it is within a team captain's purview to beat a team member half to death.

    Sev is so good in this...I love the way he is so patient with Harry despite the kid's very blatant provocation at every turn. I am so glad Severus turned on Filch and that Harry saw what a truly angry SS looks and acts like.

    I love the photos and Harry's attempts to distance himself from the photographic evidence that he did have a mother and that she did love him. I hope that Harry starts to trust Sev soon and that they can develop a strong bond. I think Sev is already more than halfway there, but Harry is too frightened to trust that an adult could really be kind and caring when it comes to him.

    Snape is pretty OOC in this story...oh, we know what he is capable of, sure..but I really don't think Sev's patience would really stretch as far as it has with someone who is so blatently disobedient, even if he does realise that HArry is just covering up all his insecurities with venomous insults and totally unacceptable behaviour. But even if he is OOC, I really love how he is with Harry, and how well he has come to read him.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Hi!!! I was wondering if you missed this chapter! I'm glad you like it. Yeah, maybe Snape is a little OOC...I prefer to think he's changing over time (at least in regards to Harry,) but...anyway that's okay. I kinda like him how he is.
Title: Care 04 Jun 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know this is one of the greatest stories that I've ever read...right?
    I love the detailed, anguished portrayal of an abused Harry who honestly cannot figure that anyone could care for him and who mightily distrusts adults. As well, you've really pegged sneering, cynical Severus who has found himself trapped into being the unwilling mentor of his enemy's son but unwilling to give Harry up to another!
    I simply can't wait for more chapters and that's really pretty unusual.

    Author's Response: All I can say is...WOW, thanks!! I'm glad you like it so much!!
Title: Care 04 Jun 2009 2:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. This chapter took a long time for harry to see that people care about him. Harry and snape need a major sit down at detention tongith and snape needs to punsih him. Harry needs to be brought under control.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! You'll have to wait and see...
Title: Care 04 Jun 2009 2:29 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this one, especially the way you had Harry being confused over why people care about him and how he keeps misinterpreting everything that Snape does when it comes to being nice and concerned over him and Blaise as well. But I do hope he lets Severus help him and Marcus Flint deserves to be skinned and hung out to dry!

    I wonder how Severus will punish Harry?

    Can't wait to see what you think of the punishment I gave Harry in THH. It's up now!

    Author's Response: Thanks!!! Yah Marcus Flint is a real bastard. You'll have to wait and see...
Title: Care 04 Jun 2009 12:56 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like! Very very much so!

    Author's Response: Yey!! I'm very very glad you do!!
Title: Care 04 Jun 2009 12:43 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww poor Harry seemed to have an awful lot of self contemplation in this chapter, poor guy cant seem to understand that he is cared for at all, I do hope that his friends and especially Severus can help him to see that they do, I think I may just crack my face with a huge grin when the first hug happens with Harry and Severus...it will come...right?? lol

    Author's Response: LOL everything in its own time...But yeah, this is definitely a 'poor Harry' chapter. He's so confused. :-)

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