Potions and Snitches
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Title: Care 04 Jun 2009 12:25 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the realistic way you are portraying Harry's emotions and confusion in this story. Also, I like the way you are characterizing Blaise and the other students and especially Professor Snape. The psychological issues are being treated realistically but not in a way that impedes the flow of the story. I can honestly say that this is one of the best "Harry-Sorted-into-Slytherin" stories that I have ever read.

    Author's Response: WOW!! Thanks!! :-)
Title: Care 04 Jun 2009 12:23 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    This is developing quite nicely. Congratulations on a turbulent chapter that makes one reflect on a lot of things.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm much fun :0)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 11:51 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. Harry is so good as an abused child that doesn't know how to trust. Severus is great as the adult who has to keep trying to reach him.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like my story :-) You're the 200th reviewer, by the way. :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 9:58 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an incredibly good chapter. I really hope that you update soon because I like the fact that Harry is finally beginning to see what's under his nose but I want to know how this situation is going to be resolved.

    Author's Response: Yeys!!! Glad you like it!! I usually update about every 5 days, so...soon!
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 9:02 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    OH Wow! That was a rough (emotionally) chapter! Bravo!

    Poor Harry just really doesn't get it does he? He just can't see one reason that anyone would care for him, that he has any real value. The confusion he felt when talking to Blaze about WHY Sev was angry was SO telling.

    I'm really looking forward to "what's next" for our boy--is there a chance that he might extend a bit of trust to our beloved bat of the dungeon? (I Hope)

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah this has not been the easiest couple of days for Harry. Hopefully he'll get things figured out as he spends more time with Sev. :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 8:46 pm
Reviewer: maksim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Liked it very much. Feels like a turning point to the whole story.
    The last dialogue with Blaise was perhaps a little bit too long, but maybe that's just me being impatient.
    And another cliffhanger! I like those, too. Gives you something to look forward to.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like cliffies. I try not to do too many, but sometimes they're unavoidable, and then people yell at me. lol :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh! Poor confused Harry! I'm so glad Blaise cleared things up for him (well, i suppose it kinda just added more confusion but at least it's about the truth).
    Poor Harry, everyone is so mad at him! He's never had anyone care about him (that he can remember, anyway) so he just doesn't know how to deal with it. I'm eagerly awaiting his discussion with Severus. Maybe they can actually muddle through Harry's confusion and actually talk. That could just be wishful thinking though. Poor Harry. *huggles Harry plushie* He won't even call Lily his mum, and "to bother", oh Harry, don't you understand, just because you think you don't need caring doesn't mean you're right.
    And yes, I like :]

    Author's Response: :-) I'm glad :-) Yeah Blaise isn't stupid, which is helpful to Harry at the moment. :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 5:27 pm
Reviewer: SiriusLives (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am loving you story and hope that you have a long way to go! Harry in this is so very real (it's kind of sad actually) and Snape is so patient. Can't wait to see what happens next and what happens to a certain nasty Captain.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Yeah I feel kinda bad for Sev - he's trying so hard, and Harry still doesn't trust him. :-)
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter a lot. Harry really needs to change his thinking on a very basic level, going against most of the experiences he's had in the past. It's great to see that struggle on the page, and show that it's not quick or simple. Also, people who seem like victims will often get vicimized again (like what happened with Flint) and that just reinforces that world view. The detentions seem invaluable now, because they force Harry to come to Sev when he would normally avoid him, and the positive interactions are working to help them slowly connect.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you think I'm doing this well - I try, but this is the first time I've seriously tried creative writing, so I'm not always sure how I do.
Title: Care 03 Jun 2009 12:27 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Most definitely!

    Harry is so confused! I'm loving reading his slow progression from what he was at the beginning of term to what he is now - he is SO in denial. Anyway, I'm really glad you updated (that last chapter was a cliffhanger and a half) and this chapter surpassed everything I'd hoped it to be. I think you got Harry's puzzlement about why everyone was angry with him spot on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter already!

    Author's Response: Thanks!!! Much fun :-) I'm glad you liked this chapter so much. I liked it, too, to be honest. :0) <=bunny smiley

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