Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Family Ties 24 May 2009 2:11 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry, Harry, HArry! When are you going to lower those defences of yours? Even just a little. Your professor is trying so hard.

    What's it going to take? And how long is it going to take.

    Whatever, I am enjoying the ride very much.

    I was also impressed with how Sev handled Draco.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Thanks, Lesley! Yeah Harry's just a tad stubborn, don't you think. :-)
Title: Axis and Allies 24 May 2009 1:31 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Who would have ever believed just how soft SS is? Not I. I would like to know why Snape was only chastising Harry and not Malfoy afte the fight? Malfoy was just as culpable.

    I am not sure I like the sound of Harry having curly hair, no matter what length. LOL> He really isn't Harry, is he, if he is going to keep his hair different for long periods of time.

    Great chapter though. Beautifully written.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah Sev is starting to figure it out, I think. I think he mostly got to Harry first, 'cause he was on top, and got distracted when Harry freaked. You've read the other chapter by now, so you know Malfoy gets his, later. :-) No worries about the hair! Harry'll be playing with it a fair amount. :-)
Title: World War II - part 2 24 May 2009 11:28 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    For some reason I am way behind with this fic. I didn't realise until I got the alert for chapter 11.

    This was great. I love the little internal monologues from both protagonists. Snape is being very patient and HArry is slowly, very slowly weakening against the strict kindness being offered (or shoved down his throat, more like). Kindness from an adult is an unknown quantity and Harry is very, very distrustful.

    I love how Harry gained himself a house-elf and I love your take on how a house-elf gets a name.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I think 'shoved down his throat' is pretty accurate...poor Harry is fairly certain he doesn't want any kindness from adults.
Title: Family Ties 24 May 2009 8:21 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    "
    “Oh, hello Blaise.”
    "

    I. LOVE. BLAISE.

    Not Harry or Draco or Snape (who are all brilliant in their own rights, but whatever)

    BUT BLAISE IS SO COOL. anyhow. that's it.

    update-now-please. -poke- -poke- -poke-

    Author's Response: LOL Wait a couple days, it'll be up. I'm glad you like Blaise. So do I :-)
Title: Family Ties 24 May 2009 8:09 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    YOU UPDATED!!!!! Yaaaay!

    I would give you Feedback Cookies but all I have are sugar-free butterscotch candies I (accidentally) stole from my grandmother. -offers- No? All right then.

    ..'m gonna read the chapter now.

    Author's Response: LOL. I like your pre-read review. :-)
Title: Family Ties 24 May 2009 3:50 am
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Is this on fanfiction.net? I've never seen it, and I wish you would post it on there...

    Author's Response: No, it's not. I'm not a big fan of fanfiction.net (for reading) so so far I haven't gotten it there. I might in the future.
Title: Family Ties 24 May 2009 3:02 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I felt as bad for Sev here as I did for Harry, but in the end he did the right thing. This Harry's a tough nut to crack, he's so defensive, makes it hard for anyone to get close to him. Keep chipping away at him, Severus!

    I even liked how Draco felt ashamed when Sev scolded him, but I'm worried about what will happen next. I don;t thionk it'd be a good thing for Harry to act up in Snape's class . . .

    Author's Response: Yeah I definitely feel bad for Snape in this chapter. I feel bad for Malfoy, too, though. Snape's so hard on him.
Title: Family Ties 24 May 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: feyathene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    one step forward and two steps back! what the friggin' hell?! I don't think I'd be as patient as snape, lol.

    so glad you updated!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, that's how I feel. Poor, sad, stupid Harry! And poor Snape - he's trying so hard!
Title: Family Ties 23 May 2009 6:40 pm
Reviewer: MissD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry...had tears in my eyes at him trying so hard to be mean and nasty while so scared of Snape in actuality. And now I can't believe he's going to do something in potions class as proof of not being afraid. Something's gotta give soon, as even I'm not sure how much patience Snape will continue to have at this point. Can't wait for that next chapter.

    One more point, not that it matters much but: Why is it that every Snape-Harry story has to have Draco as Snape's godson - is this some type of rule lol? I hate it personally, always seems to ruin the Snape-Harry dynamic to me. It never fails that as soon as I'm drawn into the story, here comes poor pureblood Draco looking for sympathy and needing Snape also. I just feel that Harry deserves Snape to himself and I hate that he has to share him, especially with a spoiled kid who already has his own parents.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorry you don't like the Draco thing. I thought about it for a bit, and it just made sense, to me. I also have some (very long term) plans for Draco that require him to have at least some relationship with Snape. I doubt it'll ever be as important as Harry has, though, so hopefully it won't bother you too too much.
Title: Family Ties 23 May 2009 5:35 pm
Reviewer: Jessie23 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the story. I liked the fact that you didn't have Ron and everyone from the other houses instantly turn on Harry as soon as he was sorted. You've also done a good job on getting Harry to act like an 11 year old. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I try, with Harry. I was a bit like him when I was 11ish - vacillating between way too mature and still a child.

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