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Reviews For Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat
Just when they were making progress. I loved that line of Dumbledores. He would make a great Slytherin. Very sneaky, the way that he led Snape into that. What I really love about this story is how you jump right into the character's heads--how you just seem to come up with the right reactions, and you seem to be able to show us what motivates their actions. I'm scared to see what happens next. I really hope that Snape doesn't finally lose it. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. Next chappie should be out in just a few days. (3-4) :-)
I hope they all survive the next potions class. Author's Response: LOL Yeah I hope so, too. :-)
I will be looking forward to seeing what Harry is going to put poor Severus through next...it did make me laugh when Dumbledore pointed out all the things that Harry had done and was amazed that Severus had only lost his temper once :) Author's Response: :-) I'm glad you liked it. Yeah Snape's a little to hard on himself, I think. He screwed up in the beginning, but he's not a bad person...
Author's Response: Thanks! Next one should come out within a couple of days. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, he's not the sharpest tool in the shed. Most 11-year-olds aren't, I think. :-)
Author's Response: I sorry. I had exams, then was at camp with no internets. I'm updating now, though!
(Hint. Hint.) Author's Response: I'm sorry!!! Exams ate me. Gonna be a couple more days but I'm working on it. :-)
V. Author's Response: I'll take that under advisement. I've heard Dr. Kevorkian is out of jail...any idea how to contact him? But then it's 'assisted suicide' under right to die, not murder...hmm...I'll consider the subject. You sure I have to be murdered?
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, this last chappie I've kept re-editing because the italics were sloppy. Please let me know if there's an area you think could be written better - I can use all the help I can get and my beta's been real busy lately. :-) Thanks! And no murdering. It's not nice.
Author's Response: While I appreciate constructive criticism, this could have been said a lot more politely. The point of reviews is to be helpful and supportive of writers, and to help us to improve, not to spew vitriol. |
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