Potions and Snitches
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Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 11:06 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, damn, what a place to finish! This chapter was brilliant. I loved it. Your premise to have Harry popular and likeable even amongst the students of the other houses is wonderful. Will the Boy Who Lived bring unity to the Hogwarts houses?

    And he is a metamorphmagus and obviously quite powerful too. I always thought he must have metamorphmagi tendencies because he could make his hair grow back when Petunia practically shaved his head.

    I am surprised that Severus didn't just request that Minerva enter Gryffindor Common room and bring Harry out when he suspected he ws in there. I am not sure Minerva would aid and abet a student in his continuing flaunting of a teacher's direct orders...nor Dumbledore for that matter. Certainly not to the extent they have ignored Harry's blatant disobedience, even if they find it amusing.

    Still, it made for a very amusing scenario, but now Harry has to pay the piper. I wonder how Severus will react to Harry's injuries AND his prodigious powers.

    Can't wait to see. I will be putting this on my story alert list.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!! rnrnAbout Minerva and Albus- Minerva is not actively hiding Harry so much as quietly not noticing. It's mostly just Severus' perception that she's actively hiding him. She doesn't spend much time in the Gryffindor common rooms. She's also in a (relatively friendly and teasing) rivalry with Snape, and so enjoys watching him get bested by an 11-year-old, especially one of his own. She also doesn't appreciate his always blaming Gryffindors for trouble, so seeing one of his own causing so much is a vindictive pleasure for her. rnrnAlbus likes how the two rival houses are coming together over the issue, and goes for the "greater good". Then, since he's decided to leave it alone, he also decides, like Minerva, to enjoy it. Both figure that Snape can handle it perfectly well on his own, which, of course, he does.
Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 8:56 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Great story!! Poor Harry. It was amazing that he managed to avoid Snape for so long - I don't think that that has happened in any other story before. I loved Snape's use of the howler, and his intuition of Harry's situation.

    What a cliffhanger! I do hope that you are able to update soon.

    I increased the rating for your story from K+ to 16+ because Harry curses a whole lot. It's not really appropriate to have the story rated K+ if he does that, because K+ means that the story is okay for Elementary students. 16+ means more like 16 year olds and up.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah sorry again about the cliffie. I do try to avoid them. rnrnThanks for changing the rating for me. You're absolutely correct and I should've realized that before.
Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 6:22 am
Reviewer: cora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done! Very well done actually. I love the insight you give into Snape and Harry's thoughts. I really like your Harry. I always thought that he should be angrier at the whole world considering the way his family is treating him. Can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I thought so, too. It never made sense to me that Harry would be angry in the 5th and 6th books but never before. Having a rough childhood like Harry dealt with (even in canon) makes a child grow up FAST. I never particularly liked Canon Harry because he grew up in a situation a bit like mine was, but seemingly suffered no emotional problems from it. It was like as soon as he got to Hogwarts he became a sweet, tractable, loving, trusting child, when he'd had no reason to be so before that. I'd think that he'd EXPECT Severus' reaction to him as a matter of course, and be surprised by love and protection from adults, rather than vica versa. Anyway, thanks for your review!
Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: Fawkes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, that was really good. Well done!
Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 4:28 am
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really liking this story. Can't wai to see what happens next,
Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Gem (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chappy!
Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 3:54 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I like how everybody helped Harry hide from Snape. :-) Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I like that, too. It gets better...
Title: Our New Celebrity 28 Mar 2009 12:56 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love Harry's little internal monologues. He seems pretty intelligent too, which is nice. And it is nice to see a backbone.

    Glad Ron is still his friend.

    And Severus really does nee to remember that he is an adult in a position of authority and not a bullying contemporary of an 11 year old.

    Author's Response: Yeah, he'll get there. He just gets into "angry 17-year-old" mode when it comes to Harry, at least for the moment.
Title: Damn that Hat! 28 Mar 2009 12:30 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, not Draco then, but Theo and Blaise. I have to laugh because I am the author of a story where Theo tries to kill Harry with a poison potion.

    And Harry even hates the Gryffindor colours...far too garish. Oh, well...no doubt he will hate Gryffindors too. He had no thoughts when Ron WAS sorted into Gryffindor.

    Author's Response: LOL sorry I forgot to respond to this. Yeah I can't imagine living in an entire room of red and yellow...I'd feel like I was at the circus or something. (Though I'd point out you were wrong about his attitude towards Lions) :-)
Title: World War I 28 Mar 2009 12:30 am
Reviewer: Johnny101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I lov your fic! Snape is very in Character. Do you think you will ever post on fanfiction.net?

    Author's Response: Thanks! In answer to your question, possibly. I like Potions and Snitches' format better, but I'll probably get there.

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