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Title: Counting Down to the 31st 31 Dec 2012 3:13 am
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed) [Report This]
    This is pretty good! I've only seen a few grammatical or spelling errors, so that is excellent. Also, I am willing to be a beta if you still need one. Send me a message if you're interested. My contact information is on my account page! Keep up the good work!
Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue) 11 Aug 2009 6:37 am
Reviewer: MuggleMagic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    can't wait to read more :)
Title: Counting Down to the 31st 06 Aug 2009 5:03 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you are doing a fine job on your story. One "criticism" might be that your time jumps are a bit hard to follow. . . but that might just be me getting used to your writing style. I'm looking forward to where you take us on this adventure.

    V.
Title: Counting Down to the 31st 13 Jul 2009 8:39 am
Reviewer: kelaa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please continue this! Its really good! Keep it up! I'm really enjoying it!!
    Update soon!
    keela
Title: Counting Down to the 31st 13 Jul 2009 1:37 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!! Can't wait for more!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Counting Down to the 31st 13 Jul 2009 12:13 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like so far! I like your characterizations especially. Sev is Sev, DD is DD, Malfoy Sr. is Malfoy Sr, and Malfoy Jr, Malfoy Jr. I especially like the subtle uncertainty of Draco, like he's TRYING to be cruel to Harry, but doesn't quite WANT it. :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. When I was walking down the corridor at school just before I graduated, I heard my boots echo and I seriously thought I was in Malfoy's dungeon. Making people feel like they're <i>them</i> (and sort of just watching all this happen around them) is really important to me because that's what I love to feel as a reader. And foreshadowing, foreshadowing with Draco. But don't say I told you. :P (I was worried people wouldn't get that as it's rather hard for me.)

    Thank you muchly for the review!

Title: Counting Down to the 31st 12 Jul 2009 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    As I said before, this story is really well-written and I'm amazed that this is only your first fic! I like the style of implied violence without being overly graphic. Well done.
    I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I do LOTR RR's that are angsty, but I've really never done any actual <i>stories</i> on my own. I've always had a hard time with writing plot because I'd sort of go everywhere and never get anywhere. (If that makes sense.) So, I'm rather nervous to be doing this. I blame my roleplaying for teaching me how to do plots, as well as learning the subtlety of vernacular and language. (And I've come to overly love implied violence rather than overt, it's so much more fun to describe what stuff looks like than try to figure out how to say what's going on and just leave that to the imagination of the reader.)

    And I'm horribly verbose, but thank you so much for the review! It makes me feel like I'm headed in the right direction!

Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue) 02 May 2009 3:02 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, great begining, way to grab the reader's attention! I can't wait to see where you take this, update soon? :)

    Author's Response: I'll try!
Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue) 30 Apr 2009 4:15 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    The beginning is interesting. I hope you will get bored in your class again soon :) M.

    Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I'll get bored in my classes, that's nearly a given. I just have to finish my Sociology before writing more. (I've also got some written as I originally had Harry in this chapter, but it fit better to change that to a Death Eater scene.)
Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue) 30 Apr 2009 9:09 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting beginning. Very clever -- Draco knows Snape works for Voldemort, although perhaps his father could have told him. Questin is, of course, is Draco pleased with this or upset?

    Author's Response: I have a reason for this. And Draco might have simply been watching him out of curiousity because he was late. I've got a few tricks up my sleeve and hopefully can get this right. Thanks for reviewing!

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