| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 11 Aug 2009 6:37 am
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| Reviewer: MuggleMagic (Anonymous)
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can't wait to read more :)
| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 02 May 2009 3:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Wow, great begining, way to grab the reader's attention! I can't wait to see where you take this, update soon? :)
Author's Response: I'll try!
| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 30 Apr 2009 4:15 pm
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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The beginning is interesting. I hope you will get bored in your class again soon :) M.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I'll get bored in my classes, that's nearly a given. I just have to finish my Sociology before writing more. (I've also got some written as I originally had Harry in this chapter, but it fit better to change that to a Death Eater scene.)
| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 30 Apr 2009 9:09 am
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| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed)
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Interesting beginning. Very clever -- Draco knows Snape works for Voldemort, although perhaps his father could have told him. Questin is, of course, is Draco pleased with this or upset?
Author's Response: I have a reason for this. And Draco might have simply been watching him out of curiousity because he was late. I've got a few tricks up my sleeve and hopefully can get this right. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 30 Apr 2009 6:40 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Wow! This is great. Well done, especially since it's your first attempt at a multi-chaptered story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you much. Time willing, I might work on more today.
| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 30 Apr 2009 5:25 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Good so far! I'm really wondering where you're going to go with it. I really like Snape's dream. A note, though - Voldemort is not that explicit about when he's going to punish someone. He's more like, "I am disappointed - crucio!" then "I am going to punish you." I'm enjoying it, though!!
Author's Response: Thank you! (I wasn't really thinking 'Voldemort--no talky' when I wrote it. I was just trying to further plot. I'll keep that in mind and remember that for the next chapters!) I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've never really done a plot before much less Harry Potter.
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