| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 30 Apr 2009 6:40 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Wow! This is great. Well done, especially since it's your first attempt at a multi-chaptered story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you much. Time willing, I might work on more today.
| Title: The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue)
| 30 Apr 2009 5:25 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Good so far! I'm really wondering where you're going to go with it. I really like Snape's dream. A note, though - Voldemort is not that explicit about when he's going to punish someone. He's more like, "I am disappointed - crucio!" then "I am going to punish you." I'm enjoying it, though!!
Author's Response: Thank you! (I wasn't really thinking 'Voldemort--no talky' when I wrote it. I was just trying to further plot. I'll keep that in mind and remember that for the next chapters!) I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've never really done a plot before much less Harry Potter.
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