Damn, that's dark, really really really depressing there at the end. All my favorite characters got out okay, but look, the world's sinking into the quagmire. Oddly, I felt like you left this underdeveloped, and Harry felt very flat and perpetually childish, but overall, I really liked it.
I think this story did to you what mine did to me. The consequences of the story happening that way went way darker than you thought they would, and like any good fic author, you ran with it.
"The Potter family became known for living long, full, and above all happy lives." And monstrously high life insurance rates, of course.
| Title: Running Away
| 05 May 2009 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous)
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Liekwhoa, dear madam. Pretty. I'm having warm fuzzies and grinning madly, even if it is supposed to be angst.
| Title: Running Away
| 05 May 2009 6:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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"who-knows-whose-side-he’s-really-on-but-at-least-he-tells-us-stuff spy" Greatest line ever! :D
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